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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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on May. 31 2011 at 12:23 pm
SceneEmo SILVER, Pocomoke, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
KEEP MOVING FOWARD NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU HATE LIFE

 That was awesome i wish i woul've wrote that .That was intense

becool GOLD said...
on May. 25 2011 at 8:19 pm
becool GOLD, Allison Park, Pennsylvania
19 articles 43 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isnt about finding yourself. life is about creating yourself.

Dude, That was DEEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on May. 21 2011 at 11:15 am
SeeAndBelieve SILVER, Stratford, Other
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Save me from myself
I can't relate
We're mouth to mouth
And still I suffocate
There's nothing left
Inside of me to break
Save me from myself
Save me from myself
There's nothing left inside me
There's nothing left

This song is amazing. Keep up the good work. You should become a professional songwriter :)

on May. 14 2011 at 11:46 am
WhiteClouds BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
1 article 32 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Today is the tomorrow we worried about yesterday

I wish you could sing it!

on May. 14 2011 at 5:16 am
KurlzBasheld PLATINUM, Abermain, Other
36 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
I like cheese.

Yeah, I did too. I could almost hear it, haha.

on May. 10 2011 at 7:56 pm
KatieMichelle BRONZE, Beaufort, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dreams are like stars, you man never touch them...but they will always be there"
"I'm going to be the one that takes the road less traveled by.."
"Life is like a box of chocolates you man never know what you pick"

Amazing. thewords speak for themselves and shows the emotion given. i love it :) good job!

on May. 9 2011 at 5:51 pm
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
5 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes a great deal of courage to stand up to our enemies, but a great deal more to stand up to our friends."
-Professor Dumbledore to Harry Potter
"What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger."
-Unknown

I reeaallyyy liked it. I found it a bit cheesy but other than that it was awesome! keep up the good work and never let your dreams fall! :)

on Apr. 22 2011 at 5:46 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

Same here! (:

on Apr. 22 2011 at 3:51 pm
angelsteals SILVER, Irving, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
let walk in each others shoes and march down the steet and see how many follow

i love it. was it suposed to have a rock tempo? because thats how i hear it in my head and its awesome!!

 


on Apr. 22 2011 at 5:46 am
BrokenThorn BRONZE, Blenheim, Other
3 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You've lived your life Like a candle in the wind. Not knowing who to cling to when the rain set in"
- Sir Elton John

Im normally not a fan of music about self harm but I did like your, I really loved the first part. I love how you have a simple song but that it still has alot of meaning! I hope you do continue writing.

on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:29 pm
hello-im-a-koala, Bronx, New York
0 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
People moving all the time inside a perfectly straight line. Don't you wanna curve away? When it's such, it's such a perfect day.

I've gotta say it's very Coldplay and that's good because, like them, you really found an artistic way to express feelings we all have. I love it :)

 


on Apr. 14 2011 at 9:16 am
TheAurorasFall PLATINUM, Dover, Pennsylvania
29 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
life isn't about the number of moments you take to breathe, but about the number of moments that take your breathe away.

hehe im singing this ish in my head

on Apr. 7 2011 at 8:36 pm
Pivotbandet BRONZE, Lakewood, Colorado
2 articles 2 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People can change, But they can also change back."

"Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death." - I love this part!

on Apr. 4 2011 at 2:48 pm
rockstardream GOLD, I&#39m Not Saying, Georgia
12 articles 2 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you dream it you can do it." ~Walt Disney

I like the beginning lyrics- they fit together perfectly!

emodog15 said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 9:19 am
emodog15, Hanover, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
too many to state

this is pritty cool, good work dude, this for some reason reminds me of last resort by papa roach and blood on my hands by the used, cool lyrics dude

on Mar. 15 2011 at 6:29 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
12 articles 0 photos 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

<3<3<3<3

on Mar. 10 2011 at 4:07 pm
ashleyn PLATINUM, Zeeland, Michigan
39 articles 2 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't take life to seriously, nobody makes it out alive anyways"-Unknown

Love it!!!!!!! Seriously one of my favorites...i would love to hear the music for it ...is it on youtube or something?

on Mar. 9 2011 at 9:17 pm
thinkofsomethingbetter GOLD, Tallmadge, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
in short, being vegen just makes you better then everyone else.
- scott pilgrim vs the world. best movie ever!

denied like how?????

desiree said...
on Mar. 9 2011 at 8:02 pm
i loved it likewow i want to put my poems but i was denied

on Feb. 28 2011 at 9:25 am
Surrender SILVER, Largo, Florida
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honestly i think this song has more of a meaning and a purpose, alot of expressed words and meaning has been justified in your amazing lyrics! AWESOME WORK!