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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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on Jan. 28 2012 at 10:05 am
HinataHyuga SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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To never give up is my nindo, my ninja way. I can't run before taking my first step. A place to return to is were someone always thinks of you. Naruto-kun. Miso ramen. Back off kushina tomato Minato is mine! Kingmortha is my BFFFFF on teenink!

AHHHHHHHHHHHH! WOW! ALL I CAN SAY IS.. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

babysteps GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 1:51 pm
babysteps GOLD, Wayland, Massachusetts
11 articles 5 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind."
~Mahatma Gandhi

wow you'll go far!

on Jan. 11 2012 at 12:53 pm
Schuyler BRONZE, Bronx, New York
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I love your song am going to play this song on my guitar .

on Jan. 11 2012 at 9:42 am
KatieMcPie BRONZE, Weeping Water, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
Don't wait for the storm to pass learn how to dance in the rain

this is amazing i really like it. keep writing =)

on Nov. 28 2011 at 4:08 pm
Livelaughlove1682 BRONZE, Monroe, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Controversy's in the eye of the beholder" - adam lambert

i think i'll post this to youtube give u credit because this is outstanding 

on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:54 pm
AliceVanityHarragarra, Gallup, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't bother sleeping without one eye open wide.There's creatures in the night to haunt you..."
-Kellin Quinn

WHY ARE YOU SAYING BLEEEEEEED IT SOUNDS TO ME YOU GUYS ARE CRITISIZING HER POEM CUT IT OUT I DONT THINK YOU WOULD LIKE IT  IF SOME1 SAID THAT ABOUT YOU WOULD YOU I DONT THINK SO!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:50 pm
AliceVanityHarragarra, Gallup, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't bother sleeping without one eye open wide.There's creatures in the night to haunt you..."
-Kellin Quinn

I THINK KASSY ELIZABETH IS RIGHT  HEARTBROKEN 101 THERE HAS TO BE A POINT PEOPLE JUST CANT EXPRESS THEIRSELVES WITH OUT HAVING A POINT DUH BESIDES ITS HER SONG !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:45 pm
AliceVanityHarragarra, Gallup, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't bother sleeping without one eye open wide.There's creatures in the night to haunt you..."
-Kellin Quinn

THATS TRUE I MEAN FOR A GIRL LIKE ME TOTALLY TRUE BUT I HAVE TO ADMIT IT WAS THE BEST

on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:41 pm
AliceVanityHarragarra, Gallup, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't bother sleeping without one eye open wide.There's creatures in the night to haunt you..."
-Kellin Quinn

WHAT IS COLDPLAY AND HAWTHORNE I WANT TO KNW ARE THEY SOME KIND OF HEAVY METAL BAND

on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:38 pm
AliceVanityHarragarra, Gallup, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't bother sleeping without one eye open wide.There's creatures in the night to haunt you..."
-Kellin Quinn

i dont get the both of you guys coldplay and hawthorne are they like heavy metal bands or something:)

on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:31 pm
Wow these lyrics are Breath taking and to me its just sad but astonishing :)) keep writing

smurfett said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:22 am
smurfett, Grand Junction, Michigan
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I love pinkkk!!!!!!!!!!

thats not weird to say no not at all

smurfett said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:21 am
smurfett, Grand Junction, Michigan
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I love pinkkk!!!!!!!!!!

thats not weird at all

 


on Oct. 15 2011 at 12:57 pm
impossibletolove BRONZE, Maumee, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"beauty is different in the eye of each beholder"

holy. crap. O_O i loved it!!!

on Oct. 15 2011 at 12:57 pm
musiccrazy SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Live a life worth living, because God gave you this amazing gift worth giving!" by me (Harley)

A-w-e-s-o-m-e! I loved it wish it had music so i could sing it around my house with out sounding like an idit teehee.

on Sep. 1 2011 at 12:49 pm
Rap_up21 SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
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"DON'T TOUCH MY COOOOOKKKIE!!!!!!!!!"

Sounds kind of like the song a homosidal manic would kill his victims to but it was really cool.

JLEIGH96 GOLD said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 6:13 pm
JLEIGH96 GOLD, Corydon, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone is a genius, but if you judge a fish on its ability to climb it will live its entire life believing it is stupid. -Albert Einstein

Very creative i love it!

on Jun. 5 2011 at 6:19 pm
14hipkri PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Is that when you get you're thinger off you're thinger?"-Eric Stopper

Wow. Really Really good!! No, Great!! I could heard it playing out in my head!!! That's better then all mine combined!!

i am me said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 11:30 am
dude dont be so rude he was speeking his mind

i am me said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 11:23 am
that was awesome i bleed it out linkin park