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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?


Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.


As I,
Will you just watch
Will you walk
Or will you stop the
Darlin’ will you


Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
I cant
As I
As I,

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…

The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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on Mar. 27 2010 at 9:43 am
Alexandria6 BRONZE, Hickory, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"This world will never be, what I expected. And if something went wrong, who would have guessed it?"

This is the best song i've ever read on here. I absolutely love it! And the best part is being able to relate to it.

on Mar. 22 2010 at 1:13 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
1 article 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

OMG thiz wuz one of the most emoest lovelyest things i have ever read i am so verry inspired i luv it

TNT25 SILVER said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 11:47 am
TNT25 SILVER, Johnstown, Ohio
9 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Pain is just weakness leaving the body"

Very well written. The emotion is well displayed and dang its just a good song.

laaeira BRONZE said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 7:34 pm
laaeira BRONZE, Kilgore, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 18 comments
I felt the song so well it was wonderful good job :)

Meli138 said...
on Feb. 6 2010 at 11:09 pm
Meli138, GP, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Like a bird with broken wings its not how high he flies but the song he sings"
"Everybody live like its the last day you will ever see tell me tell me do you feel the pressure now?"

Hey this was really good! It kinda reminded me (just a bit) of the song Watch Me Bleed by Scary Kids Scaring Kids and Give Me A Sign by Breaking Benjamin. Good Job! :D Youve got talent!

on Feb. 6 2010 at 11:14 am
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 199 comments
WOW. I really could feel the, well, feeling in this song. I don't know what those other people were talking about, because the passion and the raw truth here is inspiring and really great. I really did like it. It's #1 hit material!

on Jan. 18 2010 at 12:14 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
Thank you so much. Much better comment then the two people before you! =]

on Jan. 15 2010 at 8:15 pm
xXWOLFXx SILVER, Brunswick, Georgia
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"can't you pull out if noone is else is coming?" -Brandon Bailey

my friend, i can tell someone really fucked something up in your life, i know because i've personally written songs with a similar tone to it, but even though they hurt you, look what came of it, you're being complimented by complete and utter strangers :D, but in all seriousness, very well written, if i could "5 Star" it i would

on Jan. 10 2010 at 4:10 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
Thank You So Much!

on Jan. 10 2010 at 4:09 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
Why Thank You!!!

on Jan. 9 2010 at 7:28 pm
LordOfPoetry BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"And He Breathed Life Into What Was Nothing...."

Erm.. I agree with jake. I dont comprehend this poem ever becoming an actual song. Their are way to many songs that are crying about bleeding and stuff. Yea i cried, i got my tissues out, but not because the song was good, but because of how much it made me die inside because of how many people voted for this.

Curator BRONZE said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 7:18 pm
Curator BRONZE, Fairdale, Kentucky
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now? "

wow....this simply is the worst song i've read to date, someone please stop the bleeding from my eyes for i can't take it anymore.

on Dec. 2 2009 at 4:48 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Simple. Unnecessary for large words and deep metaphores, which is strange that I still like it. Sometimes the simplest of lyrics can mean the most. I love the repetion.

on Nov. 27 2009 at 4:48 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
THANK YOU SO MUCH...Yes I do sing...and yes it would be very screamo...however i am not that great at that type of singing....=

on Nov. 25 2009 at 8:33 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
18 articles 0 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

I don;t have much else to say besides what everyone else already said, but it sounds very alternatiove/emo and like the kind of song I would put on repeat in my room at night.

Like many other people, I really wish I could hear it sung. Even if you don;t sing and record it, you should try to get someone else to record it for you who sings screamo. I would totally buy it!

But anyways I felt it. It was very good. I love it!

on Nov. 17 2009 at 10:49 am
Yawb...sounds like my life story... I love it... </3

on Nov. 15 2009 at 1:44 pm
awesome. sounds like its got a rockin' beat and... a lot of screamin. keep writin.

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:07 pm
emjay1216 SILVER, Eugene, Oregon
6 articles 3 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
Often times, the test of courage is not to die, but to live.
~ Vittorio Alfieri

that was bomin' i loved it!!

i write songs too

Schubster said...
on Sep. 27 2009 at 7:17 pm
GREAT SONG!!! I wish I could hear it sung, too.....and I wish I could write songs at all. haha, keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

check out my work?

on Sep. 19 2009 at 7:02 pm
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
iam the greatest dork!!

i could feel ur pain like it was my own i started crying cause i want to know if he really even loved me but wow this is great