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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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USMClover said...
on Feb. 21 2014 at 10:45 am
USMClover, Sumerville, South Carolina
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I really like this song. You should make it an actual song.

Asherton said...
on Jan. 22 2014 at 8:23 am
Asherton, Brooksville, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single footstep.

I really like it ,and i just think tht there should be a little more chorus somewhere in there <3

on Jul. 21 2013 at 6:26 pm
BlackRosetears BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Give In"

This was so awesome! I wish i could write a song soo good (Jellous) keep wrting

m3g_30 BRONZE said...
on May. 7 2013 at 3:33 am
m3g_30 BRONZE, Coronado, California
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment
This song was amazing, it is simaler to songs i have written in the past. I really loved it. Keep up the good work!! :)

xo_zozo GOLD said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 10:53 am
xo_zozo GOLD, Rochester, Vermont
13 articles 2 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities."
--Dr. Seuss

Oh my gosh, this is so good!!!!!!  :)  Love it!!!

on Apr. 29 2013 at 9:24 am
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

I really liked it, but it seemed a bit shallow/repetitive. It's almost as if you were just repeating the same thing, but I can also see how that could initiate power on your end. That's just my opinion, though! You have every right to disagree.

on Apr. 24 2013 at 4:05 pm
gothgirl99 BRONZE, Manvel, Texas
1 article 0 photos 2 comments
i looooovve this :)))) its really awesome

Lynn7 SILVER said...
on Dec. 6 2012 at 9:24 am
Lynn7 SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Have confidence in yourself...if you believe they'll believe. -Yuani (me)

I truly love this piece. Its so deep. I love writing songs and singing them. So this is a request for you to sing this song. PLs! Thanks

on Nov. 14 2012 at 12:29 am
Acts1338 PLATINUM, Audubon, Iowa
25 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth is, everyone is going to hurt you. You just got to find the ones worth suffering for."-Bob Marley

Wow you're really amazing. I only wish I had talent like this! :)

on Oct. 26 2012 at 11:15 am
WithShatteredWings SILVER, Choteau, Montana
7 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are everything I want cause you are everything I'm not-Taking back sunday

Everything you do in life is insignificant but it is very important that you do-Gandhi

Happiness is an inside job- papa

I've attempted to start some bands in the past and have only recently decided to go solo. I do screamo. Maybe not the best. I play drums and guitar. IF you do give me your full permission I can easily record the song and give you full credit for lyrics since you did write them. :)

on Oct. 26 2012 at 11:15 am
WithShatteredWings SILVER, Choteau, Montana
7 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are everything I want cause you are everything I'm not-Taking back sunday

Everything you do in life is insignificant but it is very important that you do-Gandhi

Happiness is an inside job- papa

I've attempted to start some bands in the past and have only recently decided to go solo. I do screamo. Maybe not the best. I play drums and guitar. IF you do give me your full permission I can easily record the song and give you full credit for lyrics since you did write them. :)

on Oct. 26 2012 at 11:12 am
WithShatteredWings SILVER, Choteau, Montana
7 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are everything I want cause you are everything I'm not-Taking back sunday

Everything you do in life is insignificant but it is very important that you do-Gandhi

Happiness is an inside job- papa

Very good song I'll say so myself. I saw this and started screaming the words in Caps. Is it okay if I take these as a cover song and put you as the composer since this is your work? You'd get all the credit. I would just really love to see how this sounds recorded.

on Sep. 3 2012 at 6:20 pm
DanceOfBlades PLATINUM, Springfield, Virginia
28 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain, something of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first Law of Equivalent Exchange."

I love your word choice, and the kind of song this is. I really would bomb it into my ears for hours!

on Aug. 18 2012 at 1:48 pm
FireRose16 PLATINUM, Bayfield, Colorado
37 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm selfish, impatient, and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control, and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best. ~Marilyn Monroe

Dude, I got chills reading this. Beautiful and powerful, I loved it!

on May. 23 2012 at 12:01 pm
LoveLostNeverFound GOLD, Freeland, Pennsylvania
17 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
My scars don't lead me in the path that I'm headed, they simply remind me of where I've been.

i tottaly get what ur saying in here

on May. 23 2012 at 12:01 pm
LoveLostNeverFound GOLD, Freeland, Pennsylvania
17 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
My scars don't lead me in the path that I'm headed, they simply remind me of where I've been.

i tottaly get what ur saying in here

Buttercupz said...
on May. 22 2012 at 9:32 pm
Buttercupz, Savona, New York
0 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why is a raven like a writing desk?"-the mad hatter
"you must be the change you wish to see in the world"-ghandi

This is really awesome...i would want to hear this song.

Ambs,T said...
on Feb. 20 2012 at 12:11 am
Ambs,T, Roanoke, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Act on your impulse, swallow the bottle, cut a little deeper, put the gun to your chest. Ellen Hopkins-Impulse

i don't know why but i realy liked the poem-song "Bleed" i'm into stuff like that. there aren't that many song lyrics that i like but i liked that one. AWESOME WORD PLAY!

on Feb. 16 2012 at 3:05 pm
Sammy817 BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can't break what is already broken

OMG!!! i love it i would listen to this all the time everyday and never get tired of it :)

on Feb. 2 2012 at 4:51 pm
Phoenixfire BRONZE, Goshen, Indiana
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The Caged Bird Sings
Of a fearful trill
Of things unknown
But longed for still
But his tune is heard
On the distant hill
For the caged bird
Sings of freedom"
-Maya Angelou, "I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings"

I would buy this for my iPod and listen to it repeatedly until my eardrums died. I don't want to do that with many songs. I REALLY want to that with this song