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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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big .j. #50 said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 9:49 am
i like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Jan. 24 2011 at 7:17 pm
M.K.Jasper SILVER, Santa Ana, California
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The amateur believes he must first overcome his fear; then he can do his work. The professional knows that fear can never be overcome. He knows there is no such thing as a fearless warrior or a dread-free artist.”- Steven Pressfield

awesome lyrics! this is my kind of music :)

on Jan. 24 2011 at 1:55 pm
NeverSayShhh SILVER, Two Rivers, Wisconsin
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"i dont think your beautiful, i think your beyond it\" [lil wayne]

hey!(: is this kinda like a SCREAMO song? lol it was great..xD when i first read it i didnt really get it but then i read the authors note and i understood it right away.. good job. really(:

on Jan. 18 2011 at 12:32 pm
Sammie_Shamrock PLATINUM, Holland, Michigan
29 articles 5 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just bury me in the memories" -Modern day escape

I agree! you should deffinately gets so tunes in with the lyrics! Id download it to my mp3...good lyrics dude pretty rad!

on Dec. 10 2010 at 3:25 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
I understand that, as it is MY song. I was just wondering what the point to all these comments sating BLEEEDDDD were. I mean I don't care that they don't like it...I would just hope for more constructive critisism.

on Dec. 8 2010 at 11:05 am
there dont got to be a point sumone can write a song if tjey dont have a point it is kalled EXPRESSING YOURSELF!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 8 2010 at 11:02 am
this song is really good i actually cried cuz im goin thru something just like dis...me and ma bf dat i had for a long time just broke up a week ago and i miss him like crazii i dont know wat to do wit out him in my life!!!!

on Dec. 8 2010 at 10:25 am
Bradley_F. SILVER, Memphis, Tennessee
8 articles 0 photos 5 comments
i luved this song. i wish it were real so i cud put it into my mp3

nightgirl13 said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 4:04 pm
nightgirl13, Beechgrove, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
shoot for the moon if you miss stay in the stars

that was a great song my kind of song

on Nov. 19 2010 at 12:00 pm
stephie95 PLATINUM, Tripoli, Other
25 articles 1 photo 65 comments
amazing song!!! really great!!!

on Nov. 19 2010 at 11:09 am
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE, Washougal, Washington
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentations of their women" -Conan the Barbarian-

Coldplay? Really?

This song is more like a Hawthorne Heights tune


on Nov. 19 2010 at 11:08 am
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE, Washougal, Washington
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentations of their women" -Conan the Barbarian-

This song actually depressed me. I'm sorry you got hurt, if you did in fact get hurt. If you didn't get hurt or anything then you shouldn't be writing about something like this. But thats just my own opinion

lajane22 said...
on Oct. 6 2010 at 11:49 am
omg this is sooo good. id love to sing this!!! it would sound amazing if it was sung

on Oct. 2 2010 at 9:11 pm
LaughingGirl GOLD, Ocala, Florida
13 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Play the music not the instrument. -Author Unknown

This is REALLY good. I want this song playing on the radio right now cause its awesome. I can see Coldplay singin it...sorry big fan, big fan...lol

on Sep. 15 2010 at 11:22 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

You totally need to write out the chord progression to this

on Sep. 15 2010 at 11:19 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

You should post a chord progression up too.  That would be awesome, then all of us guitarists out there could play this song!

on Sep. 14 2010 at 12:40 pm
cutebunny_10 BRONZE, Marrero, Louisiana
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything Happens For A Reason! :)

I AGREE ! :)

on Jul. 7 2010 at 7:22 am
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why does everyone think I need a man? Look if you find a guy who is decent, good with kids and has respect for women, call me." "It is better to have loved, than to have never loved at all."

dude that should be on the radio playing right now!!! it reminded me of how one stupid guy can cut u up so much. thanks for writing this song. i really love it.

on Jun. 16 2010 at 2:13 pm
MyFairyTaleEnding SILVER, Villa Ridge, Missouri
7 articles 0 photos 86 comments
This is absolutly amazing...it actually triggered old feelings I have felt. I wish I could write songs that well! Great job!:)

on Jun. 15 2010 at 5:56 pm
BeautifullyBroken18 BRONZE, Del Rio, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Does he watch ur favorite movies?Does he hold u when u cry?Does he let u tell him all ur favorite parts, tho u've seen it a million times?Does he sing 2 all ur music while u dance to purple rain?Does he do all these things like we used 2?"

this is one of the deepest saddest songs i've read all day on here. I like it though. I can relate. And the lyrics are ... well i've never seen a better choice of words to be strung together before in my life. Beautiful.