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One Half of Me

September 3, 2009
By Danyalle97 BRONZE, Springfeild, Illinois
Danyalle97 BRONZE, Springfeild, Illinois
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Six moths at a bowlingalley bar; You got up to go to the car;
Something happened that made everybody sad; But mostly my dad;
You died but your not dead in my heart you see; Because you are One Half of Me;
I may get sad; And I might get mad;
They took you away from me; But I know how it has to be;
Because it is Gods deed; I know how that deed works; And it most surely hurts;
I was too young for u to die; And sometimes I do cry
You are my first and only mom you see; You are One Half of Me;
I don’t know what went wrong; You are my only perfect mom;
Theres a line between us it acts like a beam; but I know you’ll visit me in my dreams;
Your family is waiting to see you; In heaven it is true;
I can’t wait to see you mom; And until I do; I will always stay true;

The author's comments:
this is about my mom she died when i was only 6 months old =(

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on Dec. 29 2016 at 10:34 am
Black_Pool BRONZE, Al Sharjah, Other
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So good :)

on Sep. 7 2016 at 1:23 am
That was so good! I'm sorry for your loss, its always hard losing someone dearest to you.

on Sep. 7 2016 at 1:23 am
That was so good! I'm sorry for your loss, its always hard losing someone dearest to you.

on Aug. 14 2016 at 10:30 pm
desi_0205 SILVER, Toronto, Other
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This was awesome sorry for your loss please keep up your great work!

on Jun. 2 2015 at 12:28 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
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This is so beautiful and sad. I'm so sorry for your loss, honey.

on Sep. 26 2014 at 10:48 am
AnginiqueAndrews BRONZE, New Orleans, Louisiana
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This Poem is very inspirational . Good work on it!

mygrls5 said...
on Oct. 6 2009 at 8:47 pm
danyalle..this poem is sooo true..and i love you and your sis soo license plate says mygrls 5...for a reason...lovbe ya

nana gogo said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 11:43 pm
yalle you are the neatest girl i know-im so proud of u-xoxo

littlemac47 said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 11:10 am
good job danyalle, your mom would be sooo proud of you... i miss her everday.. Love you..