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The Summer I Found Myself
December 2, 2010
Summary:
We walked up the boardwalk and a few guys were coming down our way. There were three of them and they were our age, maybe a little bit older. When we got ready to pass them one of them stopped smiling and asked “Did it hurt?” I looked at him confused and asked “Did what hurt?”
“When you fell from heaven?” My face blushed immediately and Shelly started laughing so hard that I couldn’t help but join in.
“I’m Ayden, and this Jason and Carson.” The guy with the pickup like said.
Shelly stepped forward and introduced us.
“Where are you headed?” Ayden asked.
“To the restaurant down there.” I replied.
“Well, we were heading up to the beach, maybe we will see you around?” he smiled down at me and I replied “Yea, sure.”
Anonymous
The Summer I Found Myself
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This book has 94 comments.
HapHapHappy said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 1:49 pm
So romantice!!!!!:)
AbbyOliver6 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 20 2011 at 6:19 am
LOVE IT!!!! write a book 2!!
zyxwvu said...
on Sep. 5 2011 at 11:48 am
It's very interesting to read :D
Although, there's some grammar issues, and I think that if they were corrected, I would be even more interested. I'll be reading the whole book C:
Although, there's some grammar issues, and I think that if they were corrected, I would be even more interested. I'll be reading the whole book C:
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE said...
on Aug. 29 2011 at 9:45 am
The last paragraph made me feel good inside, and I don't know why. Anyway..I'll be at the Boyfriend Shoppe getting a guy like Mike :D. Lol, I loved, loved, LOVED this!! You should add more and make it longer, and try to get it published!!!
vanessasandra GOLD said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 8:42 am
it was good, not something i would really remember though. but good job :) :) i really liked mike.
CookieMonsterAttacks SILVER said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 10:31 am
I really liked this novel. There were a few errors, but I bet if you edited and tweaked it a little, it'd be great! You should write more!!!
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 11:59 am
I love it! I just posted two books called nightstalker and the beast! if any of u read it make sure u post a comment saying if u liked it or not or if i should change anything. Thanks!
Sk8erGirl said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 9:50 am
That was a great story! I love the moral i in it. Keep writing! :D
billgamesh11 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 22 2011 at 5:04 pm
it was an okay story except it had a lot of drinking and smoking and smoking pot which in my opinion was not fun to read about, not interesting at all, but the story itself was so good that i didn't stop reading it even though it had thise things in it. Also, next time you post a story, have someone edit it so it is easier for the reader to read your story. But over all, good job:)
writergurl12345 said...
on May. 26 2011 at 5:37 am
Hey. So I liked this. I had a few qualms while reading it, because some of the writing needs some cleaning up, and I think you can expand on the storyline a little bit. The idea (falling in love with a boy over the summer, going to parties, getting drunk), it's been a little bit overdone. However, that's not to say that yours isn't original. I kind of like that you made the character really eccentric, and some of the lines you used are soooo adorable! I think you could really go somewhere with this after some editing and proofreading. It still seems like a first draft to me. Overall though, good job. I enjoyed reading this, and you should definitely keep the ending. Those last few paragraphs were my favorite. I hope I don't sound too harsh! I'm just giving my honest opinion! :) Keep writing.
PrincessSparkle GOLD said...
on May. 14 2011 at 5:26 pm
I used an annonymous name at first because I was really scared that nobody would like my book. But now, I dont care if people like it or not. As long as it sounds good to me.
missemluv<3 said...
on May. 8 2011 at 5:56 pm
This is awesome!!!! I love it!!!! :)
AbbyOliver6 BRONZE said...
on May. 8 2011 at 9:32 am
This book rules! Hey, do you think you could check out my book? It's called The Searcher's Allies. Go to fiction novels and click on most recent.
I_Love_Books said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 1:08 pm
oops I mean
-Why is it that the REALLY GOOD wirters have annoyumous user names xD
I_Love_Books said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 1:07 pm
s it that good writers have annoymuous usernames xD
sammielovesyou said...
on Apr. 28 2011 at 6:08 pm
This is REALLY GOOD ! LIKE AMAZIING !!!!!!! ((((((:
ThisIsRivera SILVER said...
on Apr. 19 2011 at 6:46 pm
If it happens
