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Mental

December 12, 2010
By atemperamentalsun PLATINUM, Nyack, New York
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atemperamentalsun PLATINUM, Nyack, New York
32 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Any Bob Dylan quote, really.
Also...."Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you'll start missing everybody."-J.D. Salinger (The Catcher In The Rye)

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Summary:

After an attempt at suicide, Max finds himself stuck in a Psychiatric Ward although, according to him, he doesn't understand why. While there, he meets people, and even falls in love. With the help of the people he meets, he's able to forget the reason he tried to kill himself. And who he killed himself for.

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This book has 23 comments.

Zuccini75 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 4 2012 at 2:36 pm
Zuccini75 BRONZE, Chantilly, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is better to keep your mouth shut and let people wonder, than telling them yourself."
-Myself

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Well done- BUT NOT DONE! Finish please?
-Duckie- GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 9:02 pm
-Duckie- GOLD, West Fargo, North Dakota
18 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your heart is a weapon the size of your fist. Keep fighting. Keep loving.
-Anonymous

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Is there more? I loved it! it did end rather suddenly but I'm totally ok with that becasue it was awesome. Could you check out my book, Spirit Bound? Thanks!!!
IMme2 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 12:15 am
IMme2 BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
just be yourself not some one your not.
- unknown

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its really good could you check out my book and comment? i would really appreciate it!
SilverLuna SILVER said...
on Oct. 22 2011 at 5:13 pm
SilverLuna SILVER, _________, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Come fairies take me out of this dull world, for I would ride with you upon the wind and dance upon the mountains like a flame.".... W.B. Yeats.
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

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This is honestly, very well written. You manage to inject just enough sarcasm and comedy to keep the reader involved and the main character likable. Great Job! Keep up the good work! Although...I must say, a more thorough conclusion would be nice(:
maryanne1 said...
on Oct. 13 2011 at 12:07 am
are you gonna write any more cause its really good
julialove94 SILVER said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 11:25 am
julialove94 SILVER, Rancho Cucamonga, California
6 articles 1 photo 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live to write, not write to live"

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Dude! I love this! Omg. Why haven't you written more? Get on that right now! It's SO good! & comment me back :)
Garnet77 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 9:31 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 577 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

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I love this so much! The formatting in the first three chapters were a bit distracting, but I really love the voice of your character, and how well the story seems to flow. Definitely post more. I can't wait. :)
HaleyStar GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 4:03 pm
HaleyStar GOLD, Mattoon, Illinois
12 articles 2 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The dog? You are named after a dog?"
"I had a lot of fond memories of that Dog."~Indiana Jones~

"Can you knot?"
"I cannot."
"You can knot?"
"I cannot knot." ~Winnie the Pooh movie~

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I love it. You don't get too many people who write about mental wards.
KristinHopkins8 SILVER said...
on Jun. 23 2011 at 9:07 pm
KristinHopkins8 SILVER, Aspen, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If a writer falls in love with you, you can never die"

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it was a little sketchy. you should add to it. good luck!
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 6:04 am
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM, Nyack, New York
32 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Any Bob Dylan quote, really.
Also...."Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you'll start missing everybody."-J.D. Salinger (The Catcher In The Rye)

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Haha, alright. Well, thanks!!
tallgirl1222 SILVER said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 11:14 pm
tallgirl1222 SILVER, South Pasadena, California
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Actions make character. If you never do anything, you never become anyone." An Education 2009

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I didn't mean it in a bad way, you're novel is really well written.  Now that I've read it through all the way, your main character is extremely different from the main character of that film/novel.  Yours has a strong voice and a sense of humor, keep it up!
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 9:26 pm
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM, Nyack, New York
32 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Any Bob Dylan quote, really.
Also...."Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you'll start missing everybody."-J.D. Salinger (The Catcher In The Rye)

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I was worried that they were too similar...-__-

Somebody told me it wasn't, but I guess it is...=|

atemperamentalsun PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 9:25 pm
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM, Nyack, New York
32 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Any Bob Dylan quote, really.
Also...."Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you'll start missing everybody."-J.D. Salinger (The Catcher In The Rye)

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Thanks! Yeah, I'll get on that, haha.
tallgirl1222 SILVER said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 12:56 pm
tallgirl1222 SILVER, South Pasadena, California
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Actions make character. If you never do anything, you never become anyone." An Education 2009

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Just from reading the summary and the first page, it feels like the exact same plotline as "It's Kind of a Funny Story," a great novel that was made into a movie last year.  
imaginarydreamer BRONZE said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 1:12 am
imaginarydreamer BRONZE, WOODINVILLE, Washington
3 articles 1 photo 1 comment

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Always think of your audience, Swift advises, and don't baffle them with "obscure terms" and "hard words." Lawyers, surgeons, clergy, and especially academics should avoid using jargon when communicating with outsiders. "I know not how it comes to pass," he says, "that professors in most arts and sciences are generally the worst qualified to explain their meaning to those who are not of their tribe."

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Good start! it would help lots if it was formatted!
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 12 2011 at 8:43 am
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM, Nyack, New York
32 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Any Bob Dylan quote, really.
Also...."Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you'll start missing everybody."-J.D. Salinger (The Catcher In The Rye)

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I will! I'll upload more right now.
Healing_Angel SILVER said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 9:21 pm
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
8 articles 2 photos 509 comments

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Live for today, not for tomorrow

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PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!! :D
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 6 2011 at 7:26 pm
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM, Nyack, New York
32 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Any Bob Dylan quote, really.
Also...."Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you'll start missing everybody."-J.D. Salinger (The Catcher In The Rye)

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Haha, I'm glad the book interests you!
TheMalfunctioningWallflower BRONZE said...
on Dec. 31 2010 at 10:08 am
TheMalfunctioningWallflower BRONZE, Houston, Texas
1 article 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"GET THE CAT!!!"

"I did wood paneling."

"Do not FEAR the Crooked Zipper!! EMBRACE the Crooked Zipper!!!"

"What's better than infinity?"

"Wear your helmets, we'll be reaching speeds of three!"

"You could walk on your hands and catch up to him!"

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 I just had to read the sumarry to know, I'm going to like this book.
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 30 2010 at 5:47 pm
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM, Nyack, New York
32 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Any Bob Dylan quote, really.
Also...."Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you'll start missing everybody."-J.D. Salinger (The Catcher In The Rye)

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Thank you!