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no trespassing

June 11, 2011
By bluke11 SILVER, Bellingham, Washington
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You can be mad that the roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because the thorns have roses.

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you put the man in manipulate.
if given the opportunity
you could get god to tie off his arm.
i like the way you try to hide life's track marks.
you bottle up your emotions and drink it on the daily.
Your still going down this road trying to find what exit to take.
So excuse me my friend,
can i ask you to ask me for help.
I've learned to keep an extra mind, body and soul for you.

© Grace K., Port Washington, NY

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please id like some feedback on this writing. its just something i quickly wrote. thank you
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secrets_of_silence GOLD said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 7:38 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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this is good. a little unclear in its phrasing but i still understood the meaning