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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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Amber1994 GOLD said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 9:43 am
Amber1994 GOLD, Roanoke, Illinois
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awsome poem!!

-please check out my poems and comment-

on Sep. 25 2009 at 8:55 am
Kearston Boggs BRONZE, Sunman, Indiana
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oh my god i love this. its so amazing, i can totally relate

on Sep. 25 2009 at 8:25 am
romance_lover GOLD, Edmonton, Other
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you are amazing. That poem is like.....undescribible. You have talent

on Sep. 3 2009 at 10:18 am
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

wow. long scroll to the bottom. lol this was awesome!! Keep up the good work!

on Jul. 2 2009 at 10:36 pm
nessa_1121 SILVER, Harwich, Massachusetts
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omg i love this poem so much i truly relate to this good job :)

Lonleydandy said...
on Jun. 27 2009 at 2:42 am
I honestly don't think I can relate to anything else more than this. I just sat and read it over, and over. This was amazing. I can sooo relate to you on this. They're not a jerk, but are COMPLETELY oblivious!!!!!!

on Jun. 9 2009 at 8:10 pm
FashionGuru DIAMOND, Manhattan, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion, I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

My life, lol. Being in love with the most jerky, best boy friend that you have is tough. Exactly the story of my life. Nice poem!

Stitch BRONZE said...
on Jun. 9 2009 at 1:58 pm
Stitch BRONZE, Waterbury, Connecticut
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this poem is one of kind. when i read it, it seemed like there was a lot more than just what the title suggested.

Shelbz BRONZE said...
on May. 22 2009 at 7:43 am
Shelbz BRONZE, San Leandro, California
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story of my life. well put; i like it a lot.

on May. 20 2009 at 11:11 pm
emofreak SILVER, Masury, Ohio
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loved it!!!

n like so meny other people said

who cant relate???

i really like how you kept the rhyme the whole way through

n how the lines just kinda flow together.

G-R-E-A-T!!! XD

on May. 15 2009 at 12:29 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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WOW a lot of people love ur work, and i must say i 100% whole heartedly agree with everyone it was awesome,,, i'd love 2 hear more! congrats!

Princess said...
on May. 14 2009 at 9:17 pm
It was awesome i really love this one.

on May. 14 2009 at 1:44 am
Wow, i just read this poem to see if i would like to submit any of my own work and now that i see yours and other great poems i have decided to submit some of my work. when you can convince someone to write that means you are a fantastic writer. good job, yours truly

J.

on May. 14 2009 at 1:41 am
LikeBam! SILVER, Myrtle, Missouri
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this is ok and i can relate...its almost the most hilarious poem ive read lol

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on May. 14 2009 at 1:35 am
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Nice job. Congratulations on being published. I'm slightly reminded of an Izzy/Alex from Grey's Anatomy. Your poem made me smile. And I think in that you have succeeded more fully than all my fancy words could convince you. Keep writing.

...,

on May. 14 2009 at 1:25 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Lol i love this and actually... It reminds me exactly of me and my guy best Friend and this sounds like something i could tell him and he'd believe it! This is very simple and light- a great way to describe those feelings, make them more bearable.

on May. 14 2009 at 12:07 am
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"You dont know what you have until its gone"

My favorite poem ever! I love it sooo much! Ill read it over and over again! I am in love with it

on May. 13 2009 at 10:38 pm
forever_misguided GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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my God! You know how many girls can relate to that!?!?!?! ALOT. Good Job. It was Amusing.

on May. 13 2009 at 8:10 pm
ezsmilesannemarie GOLD, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Love it. :D Who can't relate.

Abbi2 BRONZE said...
on May. 13 2009 at 7:35 pm
Abbi2 BRONZE, Upper Arlington, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like photography you take the negatives and turn them in to posatives.

i really really like this!!!!!