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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Nov. 19 2009 at 11:02 pm
FrySnickerdoodle, Red Lion, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Pain is weakness leaving the body"
"He who angers you, conquers you"

This is incredible, best poem I have read in a LONG while

Ms.me_2 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 5:23 pm
Ms.me_2 BRONZE, Lake Mary, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A womans heart should be so hidden in Christ that a man must seek him first to find her"

Wow this is so beautiful I love it....

angier GOLD said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 12:44 pm
angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
12 articles 6 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you need is love. But a little chocolate now and then doesn't hurt. "

OMG !!! I have read this like 60 times and I absolutly LOVE IT !!Iy describes my "Friend " Mark perfectly ....Its so awesome ....I think Im going to read it again =) Keep up the good work !

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:45 am
zomg lyk dis iz da bess po-um eye'v evar red!

on Nov. 18 2009 at 6:24 pm
hi,randomperson. GOLD, Fall City, Washington
13 articles 2 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not forbidden but it is a risky to fall into,but if its real-than you should stay true. Love is a funny thing,it cant be bought like a diamond ring. Love is greif and pain, you feel lost and insane.Love is a wonderful treasure,keep it forever

((((((((((((((((:

vino1992 said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 1:51 pm
this is really great

Ms.Sexxy2193 said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 11:23 am
i totally adore this poem i definetly can relate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

snc947 GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 2:26 pm
snc947 GOLD, Swansboro, North Carolina
15 articles 10 photos 40 comments
so true. great job writting the piece.

on Nov. 14 2009 at 11:25 am
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

this poem really hit home. i kno sum1 like this, but he always comes bck 2 me... i would have never been abke 2 express it like u did~ your poem was AWESOME!!! cmnt on my poems if u want 2, cuz i culd use the feed back

meaghan d. said...
on Nov. 13 2009 at 8:47 am
hahahah i know.

this happens to me all the time

not interested in the nice guys at all

MOGLEY BRONZE said...
on Nov. 12 2009 at 7:20 pm
MOGLEY BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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Dang i thought for a minute there you where reading my mind thats how i feel about my ex loved it!

on Nov. 12 2009 at 1:05 pm
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
31 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

This is funny.

Relatable.

True. True. True.

And well written.

I really like it!

on Nov. 12 2009 at 1:31 am
starsonmysleeves SILVER, San Anselmo, California
7 articles 0 photos 20 comments
i definitely know someone exactly like this. funny. i never would have been able to express him like this though. well done.

on Nov. 12 2009 at 12:58 am
Rebecca Porath GOLD, New City, New York
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this reminds me of the poem from 10 things i hate about you in a good way! yours is more poetic and very beautifully written though. great job!

on Nov. 11 2009 at 3:03 pm
Kaylynn_Loveless BRONZE, Russellville, Arkansas
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An artist is somebody who produces things that people don't need to have."- Andy Warhol

"Don't pay any attention to what they write about you. Just measure it in inches."- Andy Warhol

Very well writen.

I like the breaking up of the stanzas for emphasis. Nice touch.

on Nov. 11 2009 at 12:41 am
CaseyLeigh PLATINUM, Moraga, California
31 articles 6 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
My wish, for you, is that this life becomes all that you want it to.

I enjoyed this poem--it's very relatable. :]

on Nov. 10 2009 at 3:57 pm
micheala SILVER, Poteet, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bite me or nothing yu culd evr du wuld mak me love yu anyless

yur poem is really great.its exactly how i feel nd wut my situation is.i love it.yur good.:]

on Nov. 9 2009 at 8:32 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

i know exactly how you feel. it's so weird. it was reading and thinking that it describes my situation so precisely, i could have written it. i think its a great poem

on Nov. 9 2009 at 12:40 pm
KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
81 articles 17 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life isn't a matter of milestones, but of moments"

"experience is the name everyone gives to their mistakes."

"be as you wish to seem."

"it's better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not."

i can relate soooo much. i just want to send it to him. lol

Avalynn BRONZE said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 10:56 pm
Avalynn BRONZE, Monrovia, California
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THIS IS SO TRUE! thanks for putting it in words!