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A Darker Lust

June 2, 2009
By Dulce BRONZE, Paducah, Kentucky
Dulce BRONZE, Paducah, Kentucky
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Another patron
of darker lust,
all lovers' whispers
have been hushed.

Beneath the willow
my lover stands
picking it's blooms
ripe in his hands.

And I lay upon
the fallen leafs
in this garden
of Adam and Eve's.

Forbidden fruit
lay near my lips
and I brush it with
my fingertips.

Then I find myself
in a shower of red,
the rose petals
fall on my bed.

And so does he,
just beside me,
and the shadows fall
just behide me.

Hapiness is vauge,
sorrow is empty,
but love is clear
as long as he's with me...

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on Oct. 2 2009 at 7:45 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

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omigoodness this is great! you used a different type of wording in the poem and it gave off a creative style :) love it! you did a great job writing this :) check out some of my work and comment please, i would love the comments!