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sonnet m1

January 8, 2013
By moisesbenitez BRONZE, Raleigh, North Carolina
moisesbenitez BRONZE, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"thought you had a friend"


Tonight I write to you my loving soul
For you filled all this day with care and love
We watched the sunset at the rocky shoal
As the sea galls started to fly above

I knew my dream came true to be with you
You said our love was always mean to be
If I lose you, what would I say or do?
For our lifes were all put successfully

and today we both stood on the altar
both marking promises and declaring
yes, as answer, but didn’t go farther
I woke up two hours after thinking

Could you have been cruel, to send me to hell
my heart, soul, mind which have already fail


The author's comments:
this sonnet is based on love and its struggels

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