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September 5, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

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"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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Everyone's stuck
Inside there own mind
feeling these things the same

They think that they're lost
but they never were found
we're all playing similar games

© Hailey J., Lake Oswego, OR

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Lots going on in my life i had to write this
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olala said...
on Nov. 28 2017 at 3:24 pm
olala, Baytown, Texas
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I love me

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im not stuck
TK_Writes BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2017 at 7:36 am
TK_Writes BRONZE, Ballston Lake, New York
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

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&quot;Being optimistic is filing in a cross word puzzle with a pen&quot; -Anonymous

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Short yet packed with emotion - good job
Poetry101 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 4 2016 at 1:53 pm
Poetry101 BRONZE, Faith, South Dakota
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You don&#039;t need anybody to tell you who you are or what you are. You are what you are !<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~John Lennon

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I love this poem so much !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bug16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 8:34 pm
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If at first you do succeed, try not to look astonished.<br /> ~Anonymous<br /> <br /> Advice for life: Don&#039;t Die

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Wow!  In just 26 words you have conveyed a world-wide feeling (for lack of a better word).  I love it.  Keep it up!
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 24 2010 at 7:34 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
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IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

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tihs is so true i am in the same situation right now. your poem helps me through it.
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Oct. 4 2010 at 2:03 pm
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This is so true . I like this .
taintedannex GOLD said...
on Sep. 10 2010 at 6:59 am
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This is great and so true.

I love it. :)

 

You're an amazing poet. Keep writing. 

Babylufin GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 8:55 pm
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I love this. It's very true. Good job, keep it up! :D

Please take a look at my work if possible? It would mean so much! Comment or Rate? :D

ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 11:55 am
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

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That was so good ! Amazing writer ! Don't ever stop :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u

SarahJumps SILVER said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 12:12 am
SarahJumps SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
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i love this
hannahbee7 DIAMOND said...
on May. 1 2010 at 1:15 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You know you&rsquo;re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is &ndash; wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you&rsquo;re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself.&quot;

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Of course! I was just saying how everyone sort of feels the same thing, but they all think that what they are feeling is special and different. We're stuck in our own minds so we don't see anything else. The bit about "they think that they're lost..." is about how we think we've strayed from a path that we were never on... if that makes sense. We all play games and stuff with our life and the people in it, but we don't see that the people around us do the same thing. We think we're special. I hope this explained it. Check out some more of my work, I'd love to know what you think:]
seapenguin said...
on May. 1 2010 at 3:44 am
seapenguin, Healdsburg, California
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I&#039;m a super hero, but with no powers or motivation.

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Can you explain it, please? I don't quite understand it... but I'd like to.
hannahbee7 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 1:10 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You know you&rsquo;re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is &ndash; wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you&rsquo;re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself.&quot;

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Thank you!! I will comment on some of your work!
rueebee21 SILVER said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 12:07 pm
rueebee21 SILVER, El Paso, Texas
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this is mah fav.<br />
poem of all the others <br />
i've read from yours <br />
it expresses a lot of emotion
Molls.xo GOLD said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 6:56 pm
Molls.xo GOLD, Natick, Massachusetts
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Beautiful. It's simple yet there is so much emotion behind it. It's saddening.