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Mr. Mine

February 20, 2016
By WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The legacy you leave is the one you live


You've not got the cutest smile,
But it's the sweetest curve my heart could find;
Your sway is not the breeziest,
But your move close to me gets me breathless;
You don't own those attractive grey eyes,
But these swirls can still conquer-
This seeker of adore to the skies;
Your hair is not of those polished tides,
But its grip is the softest for my fingers to slide;
You're not the one who drove my dreams,
But the one who stole them away;
You're not the one who lives my day,
But the one who rules them straight.
In spite of all these "Not's",
I still love you, Sweetheart;
'Cause you're not Mr. Perfect,
But you're Mr. Mine!


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MBC1215 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 2 2016 at 9:43 am
MBC1215 BRONZE, Chattanooga, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"I see now that the circumstances of ones birth are irrelevant.It's what you do with the gift of life that determines who you are."-Mewtwo:Pokemon movie #1

Quite a nice poem!I have nothing to say in criticism either!

Cam_is_Away said...
on Feb. 29 2016 at 12:47 pm
Cam_is_Away, Non, California
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I can't come up with any constructive criticism, you did a great job! I love this poem