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A Message

September 22, 2012
By Dynamo DIAMOND, Lahore, Other
Dynamo DIAMOND, Lahore, Other
54 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
I used to think falling in love would be personal. But it's all a big public show.

As the shadows lengthen
And the days begin to darken
As night takes up its abode
Leaving all to scurry and hasten
As love at first sight
As Nature with all her might
As the tender buds sprout
Reveling in the joy of light
Eyes fill with tears, legs wobble
On crutches does the old man hobble
Leaving a wrench in my heart
As perched does a robin bobble
Life is love, love life
Don’t give it up for a strife
Once lost cannot be found
A deep message from life!

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on Oct. 28 2012 at 1:05 pm
Snowflakes SILVER, Lichfield, Other
6 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm afraid so. You're entirely bonkers. But I'll tell you a secret. All the best people are. - Alice In Wonderland

I'm surprised you don't have more comments on your work! Again, I loved this. You were clearly gifted with writing :) 

on Oct. 11 2012 at 9:03 am
Kiki_McGee GOLD, Woodstock, Illinois
16 articles 16 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul - and sings the tunes without the words - and never stops at all." - Emily Dickinson

Oh, I like it! Seriously, I must have read it about five times straight and I think that I want to read it five more times :)