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The Break of Dawn

December 19, 2011
By jenx0x3 DIAMOND, Swampscott, Massachusetts
jenx0x3 DIAMOND, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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Last night
The snow descended in giant flakes like powder
Now the sunlight crawls through the thin laced curtains
Warming her olive toned skin The heavy off white comforter
Keeps her in a steady haze of dreams
The room once looked fragile
Pale and silver with the delicate moon light
But now it’s flushed
With the glow of the early morning sun
She still sleeps tenderly beside me
And as the sunlight’s orange tint
Dances across the smooth skin of her back
I don’t dare wake her
I only marvel at the beauty
Of the dawn



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on Mar. 6 2013 at 6:56 pm
jenx0x3 DIAMOND, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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thank you, i will :)

on Jan. 18 2012 at 9:32 am
AngelsKiss PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
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You have the power to live another Childhood, so open up the door leaving back your doubts.

I like thi it seems to be speaking form another point of view like someone is watching this olive toned girl,watching her sleep peacefully and at the beauty that surrounds her:) Please read some of my work and comment