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Alone

June 3, 2009
By bitty09 SILVER, Claymont, Delaware
bitty09 SILVER, Claymont, Delaware
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She stands there
in the center
She walks
by herself
She talks
to the four walls
She cries
all alone



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on Nov. 16 at 5:52 am
poetstears SILVER, Columbus, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the prettiest flowers are watered by tears

So much in those few lines! Amazin!

RAIHANA BRONZE said...
on Sep. 29 at 7:21 pm
RAIHANA BRONZE, Evanston, Illinois
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I feel this.

on Jul. 23 at 3:19 pm
Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM, Kington, Other
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Favorite Quote:
When people first meet me, they think I'm really shy, but by the time they get to know me they wonder how the illusion of shyness ever came around!

I love this, you made it so emotionally deep in only a few words

number_38 GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 at 9:32 pm
number_38 GOLD, Levin, Other
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small but impactful

on Mar. 11 at 1:22 pm
12376-astravo BRONZE, Centennial, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
" A writer is a writer not because she writes well and easily, because she has amazing talent, or because everything she does is golden. A writer is a writer because, even though there is no hope, even when nothing you do shows any sign of promise, you keep writing anyway." - Junot Diaz

" Overnight Success is almost a myth. Half of this industry is luck, and half is the refusal to quit" - Victoria Schwab

I loved this. It is so deep. And the length does not matter, it is the words that count. You did an amazing job on this I loved it. This is pure gold. The picture you provided also goes very well with your poem. Don't listen to any negative people, your poem was awesome.

on Feb. 11 at 1:22 pm
eNVythe1 SILVER, Temecula, California
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Favorite Quote:
whats the point of guns but no aim
what the point of having blood but no vains
whats the point of having love but no pain?
--NF "Intro 3"

short but awesome. very emotional and meaningful.

AntonioB915 said...
on Aug. 1 2020 at 2:09 am
AntonioB915, El Paso, Texas
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Why so short, did you not think of anything else, like I mean you have a good meaning, don’t get me wrong, but there’s no way this is the whole thing, is this like... a snippet?

on Dec. 19 2019 at 2:29 pm
MahendraSingh, Sacramento, California
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this poem is very deep and has plethora of meanings

on Dec. 19 2019 at 2:26 pm
MahendraSingh, Sacramento, California
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This poem is very deep but very meaningful

zoella said...
on May. 19 2019 at 7:39 am
zoella, Mumbai, Other
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So relatable. Love this poem a lot

on Apr. 10 2019 at 3:20 am
Anaïs--- BRONZE, Neverland, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“Maybe ever’body in the whole damn world is scared of each other.”

― John Steinbeck, Of Mice and Men

Words that touch your soul. Well done :)

on Mar. 6 2019 at 7:47 pm
isabellapopa BRONZE, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The best way to fight problems and to fight against war is through dialogue." - Malala

so short and so powerful. i love this poem!

K1dby said...
on Feb. 25 2019 at 5:24 pm
K1dby, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"War doesn't prove who is right. Only who is left."

Short and sweet! Love this, emotionally attaching with few words! :D

on Feb. 7 2019 at 7:54 pm
lydiagerges BRONZE, Franklin, Wisconsin
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very few words with what so much interpretation can be mad. beautiful. xoxo

on Jan. 10 2019 at 10:29 am
lightningboss201, Houston, Texas
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Dodo

on Jan. 2 2019 at 8:04 pm
Chayaisdbest BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Hard times don't create heroes. It is during those hard times when the 'hero' within us is revealed."
-Bob Riley

Wow! So crazy that such few words mean so much and so much of what you described is so real. No fakeness, if you get what I mean?

on Dec. 9 2018 at 10:48 pm
McKennaMiddWrites BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Be good to people. And don't forget that you are people, too"
- Colin Wright

It really pulls the reader in!

on Nov. 19 2018 at 2:36 pm
Shayla.Long DIAMOND, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Teenagers only have to focus on themselves - its not until we get older that we realize that other people exist."- Jennifer Lawrence

this is such a short poem but so amazing. I love this.

WhiteWolf815 said...
on Jul. 26 2018 at 12:26 pm
WhiteWolf815, None, Alabama
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It's almost disturbing how short yet amazingly beautiful and alluring this piece is.

mhkhan BRONZE said...
on Jul. 26 2018 at 4:51 am
mhkhan BRONZE, Islamabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“I have nothing to offer anybody, except my own confusion.”
― Jack Kerouac

Loved it