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Lover To Loveless

August 16, 2011
By aziiRose97 SILVER, Bronx, New York
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words do not hurt
but your words do
my love for you
quickly became pain
when you insulted me
coming from you
those words stung
like the venom
from a snake
i feel dead
and i blame myself
for not being good enough for you to even look at

The author's comments:
This piece was inspired by a boy that I liked. He used to be nice to me then he began teasing me and I could ignore everyone's' comments but when he began to bother me it really hurt. I became so sad my guard fell and now everyone's' words hurt.
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theatercamper112 SILVER said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 11:20 am
theatercamper112 SILVER, Lemont, Illinois
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This was very good. Well written. Keep writing!
XxTickleM3EmoxX PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2011 at 9:33 pm
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i really enjoy this, very deep! keep writitng! :)