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Broken

July 24, 2011
By Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
53 articles 16 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"sha'ahnleh: they danced with fate"-the kiesha'ra series by amelia atwater-rhodes


I Need a New Heart
This ones broken
 I Cant lose you
I've got words left 
Unspoken 

Heavy breathing 
Can't move 
I'm heaving 
Steadfast heartfelt
Holding you: I can't 
I'm seething 

Need
That feeling
Of safety of care
Don't have it I've lost it
You aren't even there

You love me you mean it
So how could you leave?
Please don't
I need you
Grant me a reprieve 

Your all I'll ever need
And ever breath I take
Is all for you since we met
Live
For Gods sake


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on Oct. 30 2011 at 2:46 pm
Laura3renee DIAMOND, McDonald, Ohio
53 articles 16 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"sha'ahnleh: they danced with fate"-the kiesha'ra series by amelia atwater-rhodes

Thank you so much. I write what I feel... Thank you

on Oct. 27 2011 at 4:33 pm
smileyface96 BRONZE, Tifton, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To die would be an awfully big adventure" -peter pan

Beautifully written. :) Its really captivating!