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Spectacular MAG

August 24, 2010
By J-blotting-ink SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
J-blotting-ink SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
8 articles 6 photos 20 comments

do you believe in coincidence?
or choreography?

as these days wind into weeks,
I am beginning to believe
that you and I
are dancers.

we are drawing nearer
to one another
and the tension is building.

the audience waits
on edge
for the spectacular collision
the intertwining of you and me.

once, we had other partners
in this grand routine.

then came a swift
change of the beat
that left
us both

and now we face each other
and your body is swaying
in a way that complements
my own.

and our eyes have locked
and together we took the steps
to throw away
the key.

The author's comments:
The sad thing is that, in the end, this didn't actually work out.

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on May. 12 2011 at 10:57 am
June_Survive SILVER, Kirbyville, Texas
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"Limitations live only in our minds. But if we use our imaginations, our possibilities become limitless.” -Jamie Paolinetti

"In the end, everything will be okay. If everything is not okay, it's not the end."

I reaalllly like this :D

Nice job, keep up the amazingness.

on Feb. 3 2011 at 4:10 pm
Kristine PLATINUM, Edmond, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"You've got to love what you've got while you've got it."

This is awesome!!  I love tying dance into other aspects of life! beautiful work!

on Sep. 16 2010 at 1:53 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

been there, totally know where this is coming from... how come this seems new to me?