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January 16, 2010
By Greeny.....;) BRONZE, Pembroke Pines, Florida
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She pelts
into a rage,
a frenzy,
like a nuclear bomb
she turns deathly
rabid
can't contain this
erratic red.
pulsing hate: hate for hating
twisted up in
her thicket
of self-destruction
her soundless screams
are mortifying
her whole face
crumbled and jammed
agonizing
crumbled and jammed
disturbingly silent
the pillow suffocates
her fearsome sobs

control slipping,
wants to destroy –

wants to break free
from

herself.

© Calvin C., Salt Lake City, UT

The author's comments:
Anger is a negative energy that builds and builds. Thw only way for a human to be healthy is to let it out. Whether it's big or small or in between what makes u angry makes you angry so let it out. ( in whatever way you have to) just don't......kill anyone:/
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d.l.breaux said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 3:00 pm
d.l.breaux, New Iberia, Louisiana
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"just don't.......kill anyone:/"

good poem:)

VanityKills PLATINUM said...
on May. 19 2011 at 9:31 pm
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This kind of reminds me of a song 'My Gift & My Curse'. It's very deep & detailed, and feeds my psychotic thoughts haha <333