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Alone in His Lar

July 24, 2014
By OdysseyChild PLATINUM, Clermont, Florida
OdysseyChild PLATINUM, Clermont, Florida
32 articles 3 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am a citizen of the world, an a student of the universe.


Locked in his room, destin for doom. Sitting still in the chair. Going nowhere. Feeling nothing but the thin air. Firm an fare,alone in his lar. Staring at the window. Dozing away, forgetting the day. Suddenly a jolt brought him to his knee's. Ignoring his pledes, there to judge his deeds. He was brought down to submission. After a brief intermission. He was full of anger at the stranger who brought danger. His mind allied itself with the sight of near fear. Feeling as if it would never become clear. Thinking that when the dream is done ,I will die an return to the sun. My destiny thought of by none.


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on May. 29 2015 at 9:12 pm
OdysseyChild PLATINUM, Clermont, Florida
32 articles 3 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am a citizen of the world, an a student of the universe.

I really really appreciate your recent comments. It really means a lot to me. And yes there my just be a part 2,you'll just have to wait an see!

on May. 29 2015 at 8:34 am
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This poem was interesting. How the lines are shaped together was an interesting and strong choice which I liked. It was a poem that did leave me wanting more, have you thought of building onto this story and creating a part two about the same size as this poem? It's just a thought. Overall interesting !Good job