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Weakness

January 6, 2013
By White.Roses DIAMOND, West Chester, Ohio
White.Roses DIAMOND, West Chester, Ohio
51 articles 2 photos 11 comments

You say I am your shining beauty, the sparkle in the rust.
But when you love me, darling, your diamond turns to dust.

You say I am your sunshine, the light which blinds your sorrow.
But remember, love, the sun sets today, yesterday, and tomorrow.

You say that I’m your hero, but my strength is unreliable.
I’ll always fight to save you, though my powers are not undeniable.

You say I have honorable strength, but your theory is very untrue.
Because I fall apart when it is beyond my will, but my only weakness is you.



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on Jan. 24 2013 at 5:44 pm
White.Roses DIAMOND, West Chester, Ohio
51 articles 2 photos 11 comments
thanks! :)

on Jan. 12 2013 at 1:32 pm
WaffleOcean2934 PLATINUM, Rogers, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams-Eleanor Roosevelt

I really like how the poem flows!  Nice work on it!  :)