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You're Loves Failure

August 27, 2009
By Laura_A. GOLD, Etowah, Tennessee
Laura_A. GOLD, Etowah, Tennessee
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If one single tear fell
and your heart was broken
could you tell?
Or am i just forgotten?

Do you still have feelings?
No not for me..., at all?
is your mind realing?
this damned world will fall!

The memories...
No the lies
your loves' parodies
written in my sighs.

the ink..
letters made from you blood
so sink
to your grave of mud!

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on Apr. 15 2012 at 9:04 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Wow!! emotional, i like it a lot! really nice work. will u please read  rate  and  comment on my work/articles? thxz

Dudet95 GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2011 at 11:18 am
Dudet95 GOLD, Ottawa, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Your mom, if you don't know the past... You're doomed to repeat it.

Aw this is beautful.:') It made me want to cry when I finished it.The broken heart feel to this is extremely sad, but It is amazing.You catpured the feel to it very well.You word choices are very well done and It felt much more like a song to me for some reason:)I can almost hear the tune lol

on Nov. 2 2010 at 10:05 pm
Bnubbs PLATINUM, Goshen, Kentucky
21 articles 6 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let it be! All you need is love!

i kno exactly what your saying here. great poem  keep writing please!

on Sep. 21 2010 at 8:18 pm
LunaWingsFlyAway GOLD, Farmingdale, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"And neither the angels in heaven above,Nor the demons down under the sea,Can ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee
...Of my darling-my darling-my life and my bride.In the sepulchre there by the sea."

-Edgar Allen Poe

yeahhhh....let them people sink...for breeaking hearts...ilove this poem

on Sep. 12 2009 at 7:05 pm
MeghanMichelle GOLD, Hooksett, New Hampshire
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Great poem!

Inkblots GOLD said...
on Sep. 10 2009 at 7:17 pm
Inkblots GOLD, Rochester, New York
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I love this, it's so beautiful!