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Alien Invasion Series: Book One: The Caller
July 23, 2011
Summary:
It was midnight when I got the call. . .
“Your a goner boy”
It was morning when they showed up. . .
“Your coming with us”
It was Monday when I escaped. . .
“Get the boy!”
Now, I’m on the run. . .
“Were do you think hes going?”
I’m an alien, and I’ll prove it to you. . .
writerfreak21231
Alien Invasion Series: Book One: The Caller
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kingofwriters BRONZE said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 5:16 pm
writerfreak21231 read my book and said it was really good! Go to thriller/mystery books and it's called Infinity: Part One! Hope you like it!
kingofwriters BRONZE said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 11:29 am
Hey, writerfreak, great story so far!
By the way, is Detective Eric supposed to be named after me or something? ;)
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 3 2011 at 2:42 pm
thanks sooooo much! srry i took so long to reply! i will be checking out some of your work for sure! :)(:
nikkigonefishin GOLD said...
on Sep. 29 2011 at 12:28 am
Hey! This is pretty good. I got to admit that it really got my attention and did have me wondering what was going to happen next. The only thing I would suggest is that you lower the specificity down. I feel that you sometimes get carried away describing things that are not very necessary and then make an awkward transition back to the main point. Other than that your novel is very intriguing ( not sure if I spelled that right :)
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 8:46 am
Thank you too all the fan out there for making this story get voted # 4 top voted for all novels! Thanks soooooo much again!!!! owe it all too you! :)(:
rage_against_the_machine BRONZE said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 3:47 pm
No problem :)
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 8:12 am
thank you for the feedback and thank you for reading! :)(:
rage_against_the_machine BRONZE said...
on Aug. 22 2011 at 6:10 pm
Interesting concept.. however there were many grammar mistakes that drove me crazy. Missing words, incorrect adjectives ("...using my inhumanely brain...") and the wrong form of you're. You could ask any one of my friends that I am a huge stickler for that. It drives me crazy.
Grammar Na.zi out.
Haha ;)
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:07 pm
actually now it is: jellotinisjiggly24
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 6:59 pm
oh and my new user name is now: Malrox21213 instead of: writerfreak21231.
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 11:38 am
great!!! i will for sure check it out!!! :)(:
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 5:16 pm
thanks! and yeah! theres going to be more books! The second one is called shape shifter, the next is called greenlid, after that is the ghost, and then finally coming together. Thanks for the comment and reading! :)(:
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 11:34 am
Please post comments saying if u liked it or not. i enjoy fedback as well! Thanks and keep writing everyone! :)(:
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