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Feedback on Goldfish Coupons and Forgotten Love

October 6, 2015
By juliiia.z GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
juliiia.z GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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 "Goldfish coupons and Forgotten Love" by Grace Coberly is an appealing, heartwarming piece about a romance that never came to be. The author shares unforgettable, distant memories of her love that was never directly acknowledged. Her unfortunate moments sends readers eager to know what happens next. It was a piece that effectively made me go through the ups and down of her memories. 

     

I can relate to this story. Although I have never fallen in love, there had been moments in my life where I regret and wish to turn back. It makes me wonder what if I had done this instead. My circumstances varies however Grace Coberly describes an instance in her life where she regrets.



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