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Death Has Its Heart in the Right Place

March 14, 2009
By Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Looking down the barrel of a gun is a strange feeling, but after staring into Death's dark face so many times, Jack had become accustomed to the tickles and prickles that run across your spine. It had become a familiar, a common, an ordinary feeling. He almost liked it, the sensation, of Death looming about, waiting for the perfect moment to strike. To him, it was intoxicating. It made his heart race, his blood pump and adrenaline run. It was like being in love for the first time, and the last. Yet every time that the Reaper swung his scythe on the mob boss, he always seemed to stop, never finishing the job. It was as though he, Death, took pleasure in seeing Jack sweat under his blade. They both enjoyed the mad thrill, but it seemed that this would be the last time they would saviour it.
Bang! The thunderous roar of the gun shattered the calm night. It was over.
'Here. You can keep it,' the assassin tossed the smoking gun onto Jack's cold lap.
A sinister smile cut the killer's face. Raising his chin proudly, as a young boy does after winning a prize, the mercenary turned around slowly, savouring his victory. Now all he had to do was collect his pay and live comfortably on some exotic island for the rest of his life, without worries, without problems, without necessities, without ' Bang! A second shot.
The assassin's knees broke under the pain. One moment he was savouring glory and the next he was savouring the bitter sweet taste of warm steel, the killer kiss of a bullet. On all fours, he lifted his trembling hand up to his chest: his shirt was soaked in blood that was spewing out on both sides of his trunk. He was cold, weak, in pain. Frozen sweat poured down his face as his insides burnt in anguish.
Writhing on the floor with no strength at all, he turned around to see who the shooter was. Behind him, sitting in the same leather-cushion seat he had been sitting when the assassin came in, Jack sat. The only difference was that now his right arm was outstretched with his fingers curled around the gun. His eyelids were heavy upon his red eyes, but he still maintained them wide open.
'No ' Impossible ' I shot you ' I shot you in the heart.'
Jack licked his lips and explained slowly, enjoying every word, 'I am dextrocardi-ac.'


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NeVassa GOLD said...
on Jan. 17 2011 at 11:37 am
NeVassa GOLD, Ft. Belvoir, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Oh god I was a stupid twelve year old

that guy was really unlucky... Excellent!! ON edge! Keep writing! 

on Jan. 16 2011 at 4:09 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Thanks for the comment!

on Jan. 15 2011 at 9:39 pm
ChessyNichole, Yates Center, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
You can try to change the world but dont let the world change you!

I loved it! It kept me on edge the whole time! All I ask is to please keep writing! :D

on Jan. 13 2011 at 9:24 am
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it!

on Jan. 12 2011 at 1:37 pm
FrenziedWriter BRONZE, Marion, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have had dreams and I have had nightmares, but I have conquered my nightmares because of my dreams." - Jonas Salk

This was genuis! I loved the title of this--very creative!

on Jan. 5 2011 at 9:17 am
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Thanks for your comment! Happy you liked the story!

on Jan. 4 2011 at 10:17 pm
MakenaB_mjbc99 BRONZE, Brookline, Massachusetts
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That was just amazing! Jack was saved by an anormality, I bet he never thought that that would happen! Keep on the good work!

on Dec. 31 2010 at 1:22 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Thanks for the comment! Glad you enjoyed it!

on Dec. 30 2010 at 6:47 pm
Snickers2528 SILVER, Erie, Pennsylvania
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I really liked it--great use of vocabulary and you did an awesome job of describing everything:)

on Dec. 30 2010 at 10:46 am
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Thanks for your comment! I'm happy you liked it!

on Dec. 24 2010 at 10:17 pm
Jayde_Marie_95 GOLD, Los Banos, California
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That was a really good story, it kept my focus the entire time and it made my mind work to try to figure out what would happen next. Good job!

on Dec. 12 2010 at 1:57 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Sure. Thanks for your comment. Happy you liked it!

on Dec. 12 2010 at 1:49 pm
EerieMystery BRONZE, Schenectady, New York
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that was really good! would you mind seeing some of my work? i'd love feedback from you!

on Dec. 9 2010 at 7:42 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Sure, I'd love to, but I can't find it. I went to your user page but it was not there. Anyway, I will check back later to see if they approve the one you submitted. Thanks for the comment!

on Dec. 9 2010 at 3:55 pm
Hana-Hana BRONZE, Athens, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Your gate is just a little locked right now" Simon Raad

I'm trying to write more creatively and branch ou from my usual stuff and this is really an iniration. My most recently submitted story is still waiting approval but you can take a look at my other one if you'd like.

on Dec. 9 2010 at 12:23 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Glad you enjoyed it! Send me a message when you publish something. I'm sure it will be great! Again, thanks for the comment!

on Dec. 8 2010 at 10:18 pm
Hana-Hana BRONZE, Athens, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Your gate is just a little locked right now" Simon Raad

This is really cool! (and taught me something to!) I really hope my works eventually get as good as yours do! :D (eventually) keep it up, please!

on Dec. 4 2010 at 3:42 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Yes, that was me. Glad you enjoyed!

on Dec. 4 2010 at 3:41 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Thank you

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on Dec. 3 2010 at 6:52 pm
lily26 BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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This was very good