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The Beauty Within

January 4, 2016
By AutumnSkye BRONZE, Elgin, South Carolina
AutumnSkye BRONZE, Elgin, South Carolina
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You do not see the beauty within
Cause you can not see the truth inside
Cause the beauty within  is hidden
Therefore you can not see the beauty inside
You see the beauty that's hidden
With a microscope so small
The beauty has been ridden
And will not be there at all
With beauty gone
Not a thing can be seen
The beauty is now gone
Its ran from this scene
All people see is the beauty outside
The beauty is inside is ignored for the beauty outside



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on May. 13 2016 at 9:36 am
AutumnSkye BRONZE, Elgin, South Carolina
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@Dream_Bar22 Thanks i appreciate the feedback. This isn't my first work. It is however the first one I've posted online. I love writing poems and stories. So i appreciate the feedback.

on Jan. 8 2016 at 10:42 am
Trench_Coat BRONZE, PERU, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Promise me you'll survive.
That you won't give up,
no matter what happens,
no matter how hopeless"- Titanic

You really got to the point. You were great even for a newbie. It's like you want everyone to know. You are correct. Perfect