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Extremely Horrible

October 9, 2010
By BradenBecknell GOLD, Portland, Texas
BradenBecknell GOLD, Portland, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth is I gave my heart away, my whole heart, and I never quite got it back."


This feeling.
This unbearable feeling.
This unbearable feeling of despair.

The unbearable.
The horrible unbearable.
The horrible unbearable longing to be with you.

How horrible.
How extremely horrible.
How extremely horrible the thought.


The author's comments:
I was bored and felt like writing.

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on Dec. 8 2010 at 12:58 pm
Without a doubt, this clump of words is the worst, most pathetic excuse for a poem mine eyes hath ever beheld.  For the love of unleaven bread, stop writing poetry.

on Oct. 20 2010 at 10:03 am
BradenBecknell GOLD, Portland, Texas
19 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The truth is I gave my heart away, my whole heart, and I never quite got it back."

Thank you very much! Edgar Allan Poe is one of my favorite writers. I will read some of yours as well! :)

on Oct. 19 2010 at 7:09 am
singingdetective SILVER, Sugar Land, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Out of a world of laughter, <br /> suddenly I am sad.<br /> Day and night, it haunts me,<br /> the kiss I never had&quot;<br /> --Midsummer by Syndey King Russell<br /> <br /> &quot;Chances lost are hope&#039;s torn up pages&quot;-- &quot;Chances&quot; by Five for Fighting

The repetition is wonderful :)

reminds me a little of Edgar Allan Poe talking about the despair, longing, and the horrible thoughts.

Fantastic job! :)