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My Love for Thee

May 8, 2010
By loggedinas123 GOLD, Honolulu, Hawaii
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My love for thee is as strong as metal
Though you try to lie and run away and
Your actions sting my heart like a nettle
You sigh and you shrug, your actions are bland
I say I love you, and you say me too
Can I believe that? Or are you lying?
‘Cos your love stayed the same and mine just grew
And you were laughing and I was crying
So, I was not pretty enough for thee
I look on the inside of communities
Souls are the true beauty, do we agree?
Right now is the best time for unity
If you mistreat people because of looks
You are just as good as a bunch of crooks

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