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fight to be on top

December 4, 2009
By walking-on-sunshine BRONZE, Covington, Georgia
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i dont know if this is right
ill try with all my might
i will never give up the fight

its so hard im tired and just want to stop
but i cant because im excpected to be on top

they tell me to keep fighting that i should just keep trying.
they say this is what i want even though i dont.
they dont even know im lying

but ill never give up
ill keep fighting
its what im expected to do
to stuff i dont want to do
i will never stop the fight to be on top.

© Jordan K., Oxford, GA

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i wanted to write a poem and iv never written one before so dont be suprised if it sucks.
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walking-on-sunshine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 6:36 pm
walking-on-sunshine BRONZE, Covington, Georgia
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Thankyou! =)
dan_wills07 SILVER said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 8:53 am
dan_wills07 SILVER, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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This is excellent and I love it. 5 stars.