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Denied Love

November 19, 2009
By Shea_N. BRONZE, Lake Oswego, Oregon
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"Be the change you wish to see in the world."~Ghandi

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What happened to our love?
You make me feel so confused
I thought we were stronger than the stars above
But when I opened up my hand, you refused
Did you have to throw me down?
For you broke my heart in two
Forming my lips into a frown
I don’t know what more I could do
Will we ever be together?
My love is bigger than an ocean
For you our love is a microscopic feather
It’ll take a love potion
But I will wait for you my dear
Waiting for the day I no longer shed a tear

© Louisa L., Pleasanton, CA

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Shea_N. BRONZE said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 1:14 am
Shea_N. BRONZE, Lake Oswego, Oregon
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thanks!!! that means a lot! i read some of yours and they were really good too.
Karlynne PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 4:24 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Life isn&#039;t about waiting for the storm to pass...<br /> It&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.<br /> -Vivian Greene

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wow.. ur poem really spoke to me cause im smack dab in the middle of it. ur a very talented poet. u cud really go far with it. check out a few of mine and let me know wat yah think. love it!! much appriciated.
pandaLICIOUS SILVER said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 6:44 pm
pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
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Haha! Love this one! Told you u would be famous!!!