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Take my Heart and Break It

October 11, 2009
By jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."


Take my broken heart,
and rip it from my chest.
Steal away my soul,
and finally put me to rest.

I dreamt about you day and night,
and I wanted you to be mine.
You watched me in my hardest days,
and sometimes you watched me shine.

Every time I saw you,
my heart would skip a beat.
Every time you said my name,
I would spring out of my seat.

I loved you with my heart and soul.
I loved you year after year.
But something always kept us apart:
our confusion, our chances, our fear.

But now there is no hope for us,
we are doomed to be apart.
Maybe I won't feel the pain
if you completely break my heart.


The author's comments:
Most of the time relationships grow from the innocence of a best friend. This is my poem explaining how it feels to realize that. This is also to express the awful truth when you discover that you can never be together.

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Duckie430 said...
on Nov. 22 2010 at 9:14 am
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

this is very good, alot of emotion, & it is evident you put alot of work into writing this. good job!

on Nov. 21 2010 at 10:32 am
aphilly DIAMOND, St. Paul Park, Minnesota
63 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Have you ever once in your life reached out to touch infinity?" -Ellen Hopkins

I love your style of writing. your so creative and honest. I really like it :)

SideraCaeli said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 7:23 pm

I love this! 

It is wonderful. Relates to me, and has  a good meter. Enjoyable. Good Job


on Nov. 14 2010 at 6:45 pm
sabina22 BRONZE, Glen Mills, Pennsylvania
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This was so interesting for me to read, I loved it! The emotion behind it is very authentic and raw, and that makes for some of the very greatest literature. It is also relatable for the meaning, and understandable. Thank you for sharing your work! =)

gozochrissie said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 9:10 am
gozochrissie, Cleveland, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the wise man is not he who thinks he knows everything, but he who knows he knows nothing"....

very nice!!!n  i can feel the emotion of wanting to move on very clever!

Aroosha BRONZE said...
on Nov. 10 2010 at 9:01 am
Aroosha BRONZE, Gujranwala, Other
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Believe Thyselves

authentic.....most authentic.... i can realize that pain

on Nov. 10 2010 at 7:44 am
flormaria BRONZE, Brandon, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
live love laugh
forgive and forget
cherish the moments
ignore the pain
lifes too short
to be living with regrets

love the poem explains what im going through right now.

N3-N3 said...
on Nov. 9 2010 at 7:21 pm
N3-N3, Saluda, South Carolina
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ii agree that was qood

jimmy_a GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 10:11 pm
jimmy_a GOLD, Sanford, North Carolina
12 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Look for me, not with a flashlight but open your heart n free your soul n there my love i shall be

that was deep

 


Jenx3 said...
on Oct. 23 2010 at 12:49 pm
Jenx3, PJS, New York
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Have faith, restart"

wow amazing, i loved it.

on Oct. 17 2010 at 7:35 pm
jordynpwns SILVER, 402,, Nebraska
9 articles 2 photos 5 comments
wow, this is absolutely amazing. keep writing. :)

jasso GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2010 at 9:50 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
16 articles 10 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

i liked it alote

it is something that happened with me too!!
can u plz plz see my worck and comment on it !!!thnks


on Sep. 29 2010 at 6:50 pm
HaileyBaby123 SILVER, Happy Valley, Oregon
8 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What the caterpillar thinks is the end of it's life, the butterfly knows is just the beginning."

I really liked this piece.

You have talent(:


on Sep. 20 2010 at 12:52 pm
OkuniTachibana GOLD, Warrensville Heights, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
As the fallen soldier walks up to the gates of heaven to St.Peter he says "another soildier reporting sir ive served my time in hell"

Wow thats a true poem i am compleatly impressed it makes mine seem inferior but stay strong and never give up

on Sep. 8 2010 at 4:56 pm
sexi_taytay BRONZE, Provo, Utah
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont tell me the sky is the limit when theres foot prints on the moon

wrong person. sorry

on Sep. 8 2010 at 4:55 pm
sexi_taytay BRONZE, Provo, Utah
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont tell me the sky is the limit when theres foot prints on the moon

love you. stay strong

on Sep. 8 2010 at 7:32 am
pnkninja11 BRONZE, Partlow, Virginia
2 articles 0 photos 27 comments
This poem is very heartfelt. I can relate to this. You just don't want to bare the pain you have for years because it hurts a lot. And you just wished it stopped. I feel your pain.

on Sep. 3 2010 at 8:58 pm
Bookwormwriter SILVER, Centerville, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 16 comments

to any and all who see this, please read, comment, and rate my work!  thanks!  i need more people reading them.  no one seems to want to comment on mine... :(

this poem touched my heart the most.  this same thing happened to me.  i loved how you 'talk' to the person you're talking about!


Crispy said...
on Sep. 1 2010 at 7:29 am
Crispy, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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I love this poem because people can relate and feel what you feel as you describe the struggle and hurt a relationship can bring to ones heart.

on Aug. 27 2010 at 7:09 pm
createakristen SILVER, Corpus Christi, Texas
5 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There isn't a person on this planet who should let a past nightmare dictate or cloud their future dreams." -CM Punk

our confusion, our chances, our fear. Wow, just how i'm feeling right now. Awesome job!