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October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.

© Stephanie F., Garnerville, NY

The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it
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zack1069 GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 11:30 pm
zack1069 GOLD, Loveland, Ohio
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i like it its really simple but good
TylerC said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 8:45 am
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this is actually pretty good
Katiebrox3 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 10:40 pm
Katiebrox3 BRONZE, Cape Coral, Florida
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I really like this, it describes me and my old friend right now. Keep writing, your really good. <3
Griffin SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 8:31 pm
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this is really good and i really like it. i think everyone can relate
raychell.faith GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 1:48 pm
raychell.faith GOLD, Somewhere You Left Your Heart, California
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very sweet & sad. we can all relate to the changes and goodbyes that happen over summertime. <3
softlylara BRONZE said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 8:01 am
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when i read your poem i imediately assumed it was about an ex boy friend or old crush untill i read your quote about it and relized it was about old friends who changed ... i thought your poem was amazing and like how it can really relate to either ... great job ... keep writingg !!!!!
respecturself7 SILVER said...
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I love this poem! You have talent!
GreenLover SILVER said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:23 pm
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hey that was. i really felt what you were talking about. would you mind taking a look at some of my work?
JustWriting BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 4:35 pm
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Really good! I loved it.

I know exactly what you mean.

this has happened to me more than once!
Saidah. GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 3:12 pm
Saidah. GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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Omg, this poem is really niceee,

I really enjoyed readinqq it.

You shud check outt some of mhy pieaces,

Hopee you injoy them.??
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 2:08 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thanx ya everyone keeps tellin me it's not a sonnet but there rly isn't anything i can do about it now...so atleast u think its good lol =P
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 2:07 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thanx:) I'm sure u could n prolly alrdy have:)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 2:06 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Oh wow thank you sooo much:) that's such a compliment! I hope to see it in a book one day:)
Wolfayne said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 12:01 pm
It makes a good poem, I admit. However, It isn't exactly a true sonnet.

Sonnets have 4 stanzas, the first 3 of which have 4 lines each, and the 4th of which has only 2 lines. it goes in the abab,cdcd, efef, gg rhyme sceme. AND each line is supposed to have 10 syllables.

I'm not saying it isn't good, just that it's not exactly a sonnet.

Please look at my poetry and story! Thanx! ;D
bmmskh said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 10:34 am
i like this poem alot and i proble could never right one as good as this one so keep righting.......
bbg.101 said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 3:08 pm
wow i like this alot, i can relate to every single word on this page i love this i can see this in books. good job i can defanetly rate this a 10000000000MAX
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 2:08 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank you vry much:D
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 2:06 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Wow I never thought of this poem that way but i guess that works too:) thanx for ur comment:))
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 2:05 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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this poem rly is about a friendship not a bf/gf relationship...I'm glad u enjoyed it:) Thanx
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 2:03 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank you so much! This poem is prolly one of my favs because it rly wasn't forced at all it came to me vry naturally :)