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October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.

© Stephanie F., Garnerville, NY

The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it
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Karamel PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 8:36 pm
Karamel PLATINUM, Gwinn, Michigan
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"Clever people will recognize and tolerate nothing but cleverness." -Anonymous

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It's very sad... I can just imagine what is happening in the poem, and I like that a lot!
GuardianAngel13 SILVER said...
on Nov. 4 2010 at 1:19 pm
GuardianAngel13 SILVER, Piscataway, New Jersey
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OMG. this made me nostalgic, this is truly wonderful :) i love it<3 keep writing :)
enchanted BRONZE said...
on Nov. 3 2010 at 8:15 pm
enchanted BRONZE, Vallonia, Indiana
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Fantastic job. The best thing I have read on this site so far, I loved it. Magnificent!! :)
sarahxinsane921 SILVER said...
on Nov. 3 2010 at 7:47 pm
sarahxinsane921 SILVER, St. Charles, Missouri
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Honestly, This Is A Wonderful Piece Of Work, And I Wish I Could Say I Written It Myself. :)

 

StormyxD SILVER said...
on Nov. 3 2010 at 1:09 pm
StormyxD SILVER, Winter Park, Florida
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I love this poem, I remember reading it this summer. I can't believe it hasn't been published. It speaks to so many people. It deserves to be in print.
Bnubbs PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 2 2010 at 9:33 pm
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this is a really extremely good poem!! i love it soooo much and its so very true. thank you VERY much for writing this. its inspiring (at least it is to me) and i would like it if you checked out my poems too. and if you wrote more poems and sent them to me. i would REALLY like to read more of your poems. :) keep writing!!
kitkat522 said...
on Oct. 31 2010 at 1:24 pm
kitkat522, Monopolis, Massachusetts
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You need to move this to a new section, it's not a sonnet at all. Your poem has twelve lines and no metre.
eelrtb BRONZE said...
on Oct. 28 2010 at 11:02 pm
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this is great!  people can definitely change right before your eyes.  It really hurts when people change and they dont even realize it, no matter how many times you tell them to change back.
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I love this so much... It is so true though, that other people can change so much, but you might not.
bballchic_34 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 6:38 pm
bballchic_34 BRONZE, West Bend, Wisconsin
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Love this poem, awesome job!
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 22 2010 at 5:03 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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This is so powerful and heartfelt. I can relate SO much and the flow you put into this is beautiful. I definitely enjoyed this. Could you check out some of my stuff if you get a second? Thanks and keep writing!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 19 2010 at 1:35 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank you so much! I apreciate the compliment!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 19 2010 at 1:34 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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That they are
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 19 2010 at 1:33 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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I'm sorry, I hope the best for you and that significant person
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 19 2010 at 1:32 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank you, I try to make my poems as relatable as possible even when its something you wish you didn't relate to
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 19 2010 at 1:31 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank you I am glad that you enjoyed my poem, I'm sorry that you can relate though.It is so hard to see someone change right infront of your eyes
holly.nicole SILVER said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 4:50 pm
holly.nicole SILVER, Templeton, Massachusetts
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oved this peom it makes me not want to grow up...but then it makes me excited at the same time(: and I know I do not wanna change anything about....just incase someone I "remember has not changed since last Semptember"!! (:
SpringRayyn PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 13 2010 at 10:11 pm
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I love how you linked the beginning to the end like that! I can totally see what you mean.
BeatleMania16 said...
on Oct. 12 2010 at 8:12 pm
i love this!! its a great poem!! keep writing :)
BroadwayBoundOK BRONZE said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 9:02 pm
BroadwayBoundOK BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
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When reading this, I dont really think of a friend. i think of a guy. This is exactly what happened.

I love this. One of my favorites!!