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A Walk In The Park

October 7, 2009
By cross.fire BRONZE, Monroe, Louisiana
cross.fire BRONZE, Monroe, Louisiana
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is the fire and hope is what burns."

A leaf falls, old and damaged
A leaf falls, hopeless and unsure
As it drops to the ground,
A laughing boy picks it up and carries it home.

My heart heals but I still feel the pain
As it hurts, I remember it all again
And all I want to do is go home
...All I want to do is go home...

I want to talk to you one last time
Believe it or not I would have a reason and a rhyme
I would say please stop look at me in such a way
You need to hear what I want, and what I have to say.

A ball drops and hits the ground
Like me it shatters on the pavement.

That love has stopped, don't worry, it's gone now
Please take my hand, no hard feelings
Please don't feel bad now, my heart is healing...

Don't feel bad, my heart is healing.

The author's comments:
Have you ever felt like you have hurt someone just because you fell in love? You can't help these feelings no matter how hard you want to... Well, this is what came when I fell hard and when I tried to bounce back up. I did, by the way, just as soon as he fell down for me. Maybe I should have staid... That's a poem for next time, I'm sure...

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gabigal SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 6:11 pm
gabigal SILVER, Conroe, Texas
6 articles 12 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"everything has beauty in it, you just have to see it"

i loveish it.... :( my heart hasnt healed yet, but i love this..awesomness

on Oct. 23 2009 at 3:09 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Vry good...you have a talent...keep writing...and if you have the chance you should read some of my poems:)