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The Meaning of Love? MAG

November 8, 2008
By Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 2 comments

The beating of my broken heart, now chained and locked away,
I hear much louder, through the night, than words we never say.
As hollow kisses turn to dust and fall against my skin,
I pray that I might find the strength to fall in love again.
Abandoned innocence, stripped away, discarded on the floor.
In the dirt, I bury hope that love leaves unlocked doors.
I am held, though never cherished, yet to be made whole.
My tears can wipe themselves away, but I must save my soul.
Bare feet, run, lead me home, where I am Mother’s child,
And toward the pale rose sunset for a pretty little while.
If broken wings may carry dreams, and carry me to sleep,
Take me far away from love and tell me what it means.


The author's comments:
Writing is my passion … I hope you enjoy my poem!

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kksme SILVER said...
on Jul. 9 2010 at 8:13 am
kksme SILVER, Greenvale, New York
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This is the most amazing thing I've ever read. It might be my favorite poem of all time. Please keep writing.

on Jun. 30 2010 at 8:33 pm
DeathlyGrace GOLD, Kingwood, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;m nobody. Who are you? Are you nobody to?&quot;<br /> Emilie Dickinson

Oh my. -gasps- This ws lovely. You have such beautiful work. I love this so much...

on Jun. 30 2010 at 12:08 pm
peacelovepoetry, Florissant, Missouri
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wow!!! i wish i had your creativity. this is fantastic :)

on Jun. 24 2010 at 1:06 pm
just-a-joy GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
12 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Eminem: Success is my only option, failure&#039;s not

that right there was beautifuly killer!!!!!!! wow loved it

M2M4life:) said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 10:19 pm

oh my gosh!!! i absolutely love this.. you hav a wonderful talent

 

 


Shanii211 said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 3:38 pm
U did a great job and this poem seems proffessionally written (meaning ur a gr8 writer) keep writing!

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 20 2010 at 7:59 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

Love this! Great job! Yes I did enjoy it!

 

Check out my work!


on Jun. 20 2010 at 7:43 pm
tweety1ofakind BRONZE, Magnolia, Mississippi
1 article 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
\&quot; You Must Be The Change That You Want To See \&quot;

i absolutely loved it !! keep up the work because that was touching !!

on Jun. 17 2010 at 8:15 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

That was really good ! Please come and check my poems :) Thanks .

kksme SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 6:19 pm
kksme SILVER, Greenvale, New York
9 articles 0 photos 11 comments
this is so good!

on Jun. 17 2010 at 5:34 pm
andshesfearless GOLD, West Harrison, New York
10 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.<br /> -jimi hendrix-

this is SO amazing. you have to keep writing

on Jun. 17 2010 at 3:47 pm
B1ackAnge1 SILVER, Darrington, Washington
6 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make the best out of the worst situation.

that is really good. I really loved it, keep writing

on Jun. 17 2010 at 1:50 pm
PoemLoverSara PLATINUM, Tampa, Florida
27 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love Is Nothing But A Dream&hearts;

Really inspiring, awesome writing you are really talented keep up the good work!:]

on Jun. 17 2010 at 12:09 pm
We_Are_Broken SILVER, Snohomish, Washington
7 articles 11 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no fear in love, but perfect love casts out fear; for fear has to do with punishment, and whoever fears has not reached perfection in love. ~ 1 John 4.18

I loved this! You are a really good writer! :)

on Jun. 17 2010 at 12:08 pm
VanishingEntity, Keller, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reality continues to ruin my life.<br /> <br /> -Bill Watterson

Really nice, I love "As hollow kisses turn to dust and fall against my skin," very nice imagery!

on Jun. 17 2010 at 12:08 pm
ms.long4eva SILVER, Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
If life gives you fabric, make a clothing line.

This poem is absolutely fantastic! Truly inspiring!

trblue GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 9:11 am
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
14 articles 7 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Too often we lose sight of life&#039;s simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&amp;* upside the head. &quot;

your good and it dose not lack anything. i feel it

Swiwi17 SILVER said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 4:35 pm
Swiwi17 SILVER, Glasscity, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Nothing ever promised tomorrow today&quot;

Sounds good, will do!

on Jun. 6 2010 at 4:34 pm
ericers123 GOLD, Chester, Other
13 articles 3 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People never change, circumstances do.&quot;- Me.

Wow. think that this is the best ive seen on this site yet! Its sooo good! thanks for sharing it!

Echo16 SILVER said...
on Jun. 1 2010 at 4:39 pm
Echo16 SILVER, Gainesville, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont let the life you were born into define you, but let your dreams and passions drive you to greatness.

Wow real realistic and descriptive. great job!!!