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A Flaw of Love

October 15, 2012
By Kirika GOLD, Worcester, Massachusetts
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Kirika GOLD, Worcester, Massachusetts
14 articles 8 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Without music, life would be a mistake." - Friedrich Nietzsche

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Please stop me from crying,
Help me win this fight
Whisper to the wind,the water,
The cherry blossoms of the night
Help my smile awake,
With a joy unsurpassed
Even if such gentle things,
Were never meant to last
I remember all the feelings,
You gave me
And when i think of you,
My soul flies free
Even while my heart,
Aches deeply
Memories of you let me,
Treat others sweetly <3

© Louisa L., Pleasanton, CA

The author's comments:
Its about my best friend (of which i wont mention his name ;) i call him by a nickname of True <3
oh and a footnote:
Its embarassing to admit but he has the key to my heart and he was my first crush (>///<)
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This article has 13 comments.

A.Marcus DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 1 2016 at 1:27 pm
A.Marcus DIAMOND, Landing, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same.&quot;<br /> -Emily Bronte<br /> <br /> &quot;A shadow is the most loyal friend.&quot;<br /> -Amanda Marcus

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This is good and super expressive! I loved it!
Jordan-Tyler GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2012 at 2:37 pm
Jordan-Tyler GOLD, Worcester, Massachusetts
16 articles 6 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself and you can be anything<br /> Inspiration is a big thought that can come from little ideas.

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yup            
Kirika GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2012 at 7:35 am
Kirika GOLD, Worcester, Massachusetts
14 articles 8 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Without music, life would be a mistake.&quot; - Friedrich Nietzsche

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yup, were bffs
Kirika GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2012 at 7:28 am
Kirika GOLD, Worcester, Massachusetts
14 articles 8 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Without music, life would be a mistake.&quot; - Friedrich Nietzsche

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im really embarassed that he knows  
Babe_Angel said...
on Oct. 29 2012 at 8:12 pm
Babe_Angel, Alhambra, California
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oh...that's sweet...!! how nice, you and her goes to the same school?
Jordan-Tyler GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2012 at 9:11 am
Jordan-Tyler GOLD, Worcester, Massachusetts
16 articles 6 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself and you can be anything<br /> Inspiration is a big thought that can come from little ideas.

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dont worry he knows now, and he thought it was cute. lol. she told me today.
Babe_Angel said...
on Oct. 28 2012 at 11:52 pm
Babe_Angel, Alhambra, California
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You should tell him, let he know what's on your mind. Who knows, maybe he's thinking the same too. How do you met him? Are you guy in the same school?
Kirika GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2012 at 7:16 pm
Kirika GOLD, Worcester, Massachusetts
14 articles 8 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Without music, life would be a mistake.&quot; - Friedrich Nietzsche

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LOLZ he doesnt know it but i wont tell him about it either! ;)
Jordan-Tyler GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2012 at 5:24 pm
Jordan-Tyler GOLD, Worcester, Massachusetts
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Be yourself and you can be anything<br /> Inspiration is a big thought that can come from little ideas.

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lol. really tracy lol
Babe_Angel said...
on Oct. 26 2012 at 12:05 am
Babe_Angel, Alhambra, California
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so jealous, I wish I can write poem like you. He must be very lucky
Kirika GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2012 at 7:28 am
Kirika GOLD, Worcester, Massachusetts
14 articles 8 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Without music, life would be a mistake.&quot; - Friedrich Nietzsche

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;) not telling ;P
Babe_Angel said...
on Oct. 24 2012 at 11:59 pm
Babe_Angel, Alhambra, California
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This is a pretty nice poem. I was wondering who is the lucky guy?
Jordan-Tyler GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2012 at 8:50 pm
Jordan-Tyler GOLD, Worcester, Massachusetts
16 articles 6 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself and you can be anything<br /> Inspiration is a big thought that can come from little ideas.

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you are an amazing writer tracy.  see you at school tommorow lol.