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Love

June 1, 2009
By jessica cunningham BRONZE, Reno, Nevada
jessica cunningham BRONZE, Reno, Nevada
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Love is in the air i take off my gass mask/i try to not to fail this task/love is like sugar and i just want a dash/hugs are like flower so i can cook my cake/ your kises is like the icin so im ready to bake/you were my love but now is too late/love is in the air but why do i have hate?


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on Oct. 16 2020 at 10:28 pm
rmswagert BRONZE, Apex, North Carolina
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making every line a simile is really unique and provides good structure

on Jan. 31 2011 at 5:33 pm
sillywillysooz GOLD, Grantsville, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"never let the fear of striking out, ever keep you from playing the game"

this is really good! :)

 


on Jan. 26 2011 at 4:39 pm
leonajordan BRONZE, Fort Walton Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Never give up, when you're down, get up and try again.

This is an ohkayy poem...I guess.... :)