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My Unnameable

June 1, 2009
By Chicken--Pie SILVER, Higher Bebington, Other
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Why did the moth fall for the star?
The answer to that one is easy by far.

But why did beauty fall for the beast?
She wouldn’t. The fairytale ending has ceased.

But what if she did fall, head over heels?
You can’t imagine how terrible it feels.

To be so afraid of what people think.
The Titanic is sail, crash and sink.

Survivors: One. Casualties: Many.
But which one is one? Which one, if any?

I feel like I’m drowning without any water.
Just pressure and pressure and, look, yet more pressure.

I can’t make things rhyme anymore – like I’d need to.
I can’t write things down like before ‘cause I miss you.

© Steve S., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
I wrote this on Holiday in Greece. I got it right first time. I was over-heated an dehydrated, but I managed it.
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Rsnail-925 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 4 2021 at 8:58 pm
Rsnail-925 PLATINUM, Boulder, Colorado
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A story has as many versions as it has readers - Winter Of Our Discontent

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Super cool, like it a lot!
Laila.123 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 14 2013 at 12:13 am
Laila.123 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Life's what you make it.

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Very good and relatable. This is perfect for understanding someone's mood who is going through a break up. I love it!
sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 27 2013 at 8:48 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

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ahh love it. check out some of my writing?
Shahiro PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 13 2012 at 9:12 am
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

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Really well written, good job! Ps. Please check out my work? =-D
Hope Udarbe said...
on Jan. 28 2011 at 4:40 pm
Hope Udarbe, Westminster, Colorado
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this poem almost made me cry it was that great
LolCatzMcGee PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 10:32 am
LolCatzMcGee PLATINUM, London, Hawaii
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love it. all your poetry is really amazing and unique.
carlytracz PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 1:26 pm
carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We allow ourselves to dream without fear of how impossible it may seem.&quot; -Z.H.<br /> &quot;Anything other than yes is no. Anything other than stay is go. Anything less than &#039;I love you.&#039; is lying.&quot; -John Mayer.

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Aw this is really good! The last two lines are so cute. :)
Love_Kills_the_Blind PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 12 2009 at 6:46 pm
Love_Kills_the_Blind PLATINUM, Fort Collins, Colorado
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&quot;Never regret anything, at one point its exactly what you wanted.&quot;

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wow...that is the only word that i can think of! its amazing!