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Piano Sonatas

September 4, 2011
By jasont727 PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
jasont727 PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
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Favorite Quote:
If there was no change, there would be no butterflies.


Piano sonatas
Like little rapid heartbeats
Remind me of you

The author's comments:
Everything in the world reminds me of you.

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on Oct. 1 2011 at 7:42 pm
jasont727 PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
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Favorite Quote:
If there was no change, there would be no butterflies.

Thank you! I love to write haikus so much for this very reason.

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on Oct. 1 2011 at 3:30 pm
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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I totally agree with Nextworld1.  Sometimes the shortest pieces are the most powerful ones...

on Sep. 11 2011 at 2:58 am
jasont727 PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
46 articles 18 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
If there was no change, there would be no butterflies.

I completely agree. I always challenge myself to write these haikus and flash fiction, because sometimes the best writing is with the least amount of words. Thank you so much :)

on Sep. 10 2011 at 10:39 pm
Nextworld1 BRONZE, Rochester, New York
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I love the shortness of your poem. It is my belief that not every poem has to fill up a lot of room to get the message and feeling across