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Forbidden Fruit Haiku

June 3, 2009
By NamezTJ PLATINUM, Scottsville, New York
NamezTJ PLATINUM, Scottsville, New York
29 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates...." (haha got to love Forest Gump)

Looking for beauty
Sees it hanging over him
The Forbidden Fruit

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This article has 15 comments.

on May. 24 at 11:33 am
Mihini201 BRONZE, Moratuwa, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Great power comes with great responsibility

- Peter Parker -

It’s amazing….

NoniDoni GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2015 at 8:44 pm
NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
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It's so... magical! I never in a million years would have thought of something that creative in such few words! Nice work!

Suemayeh said...
on Jan. 5 2015 at 8:38 pm
This is a really good poem. I personally like haiku's and this one is amazing. Its short but great.

on Jul. 28 2013 at 8:39 pm
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
33 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime" ~ Celine Dion
"If you're going to pray don't worry... if you're going to worry don't pray." ~ Mariah Carey

This is beautiful! Excellent work!  ~Please check out some of my work. 

on Apr. 22 2012 at 10:54 am
JessicaQ PLATINUM, North Vancouver, British Columbia, Other
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I like it! It's so…… original :P Check out my stuff?

on Mar. 31 2012 at 8:57 am
dragonfly95 SILVER, Argaon, Georgia
7 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
'' there is nothing to fear but fear its self''

this is strongly written,forbidden fruit... wow!check out my work please and thank you

on Oct. 29 2011 at 12:52 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"

Pretty :]


on Dec. 3 2010 at 1:18 pm
MizzCizz BRONZE, Warrington, Other
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gosh, this is sooo short and means nothing but it is soooooo strong! x love it. write more :D

*Jade* said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 8:19 pm
even though you got first and i got second im proud to say im glad you did better this poem is amazingly awsome! keep writing!

on Feb. 11 2010 at 9:41 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
20 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

great job i love this. check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/168414/Heart-on-Fire/

on Nov. 24 2009 at 3:24 pm
whisperingofdawn GOLD, Colorado City, Arizona
17 articles 12 photos 87 comments
i love how the words 'forbidden fruit' bring so much to the picture.

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:06 am
warriorsfan711 SILVER, Plant City, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
mashpotaoes are amazing

Same Here!

on Nov. 3 2009 at 4:40 pm
NamezTJ PLATINUM, Scottsville, New York
29 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates...." (haha got to love Forest Gump)

thank you! it means a lot

on Sep. 18 2009 at 9:55 am
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

That's pretty! It's very original.

trying2fitin said...
on Sep. 4 2009 at 4:14 pm
that is amazing. i love haikus its all i write