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To Anonymous

June 4, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.


I write this poem to,
Those who hide in the shadows,
And cover their eyes.

Not to brave souls who,
Choose to stand up and fight but,
To anonymous.



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on Aug. 11 2010 at 6:27 pm
avantgarde GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
10 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
I write for the same reason I breathe...because if I didn't I would die. --Isaac Asimov

This poem is deep and strong! I love it; the beauty is, well, beautiful :) Great job!

on Aug. 9 2010 at 6:04 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so much!!!

on Aug. 8 2010 at 9:28 pm
Seelix PLATINUM, Chandler, Arizona
20 articles 3 photos 72 comments
Beautiful! This haiku does an ecelent job of conveying the author's emotion and unlike  most haikus it stays with you after you read it.

on Aug. 8 2010 at 4:21 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so much!! I wil!!!

on Aug. 6 2010 at 8:20 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Haiku are harder to write because since they're so short, its hard to squeeze some emotion in there, but I definintely feel like you packed some in! Great job - Check out my haiku Perseverant Nature? Thanks and keep writing!

on Aug. 5 2010 at 1:44 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!!!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 10:57 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

that was nice  :) but i want more! hehe i liked wat i was readin, so... :D

on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:45 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!!

Zzzie SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 7:06 pm
Zzzie SILVER, North Canton, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Think positive, or I'll have to start singing."

So simple, yet, so amazing! I loved it! :D

on Aug. 2 2010 at 11:57 am
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
37 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

came back and had to read it again :) more pieces on my page btw !

on Jul. 28 2010 at 7:01 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so mcuh!!! i will!!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 7:01 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 6:09 pm
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
37 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

great job :) keep writing, Mel. check out my piece if you would like

on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:06 pm
Solipsism=Confusion GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
13 articles 0 photos 1 comment
A really great piece. I just love its simplicity. Keep it up! 

on Jul. 27 2010 at 10:20 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanx!!!!!

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on Jul. 27 2010 at 2:18 pm
Coffee BRONZE, Tallahassee, Florida
4 articles 5 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your Face.

Thiis is truely amazing. Short, simple, but beautiful. It's worded so well, and it's uniqe, and i just love it. 5 stars!! :)

on Jul. 26 2010 at 7:52 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!

SupSup said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 5:38 am
SupSup, Rockland, Maine
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
Nice poem. I like the way it flows and kind of rolls of the tongue. 

on Jul. 25 2010 at 4:01 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so much!! i will!!! check out my other stuff too!!!!

on Jul. 24 2010 at 10:58 pm
TristeLuvz2Write SILVER, Groton, New York
7 articles 3 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life's Not about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning to dance in the rain.
"Maybe I should call Bella and hang up!" --Quil Ateara, The Twilight Saga: Eclipse

Its really good! Keep writing! if you could critique some of my other work besides A never Ending Cycle, it would be amazing.