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Me and You

September 11, 2009
By I-Love-Him!!!! BRONZE, Union City, Tennessee
I-Love-Him!!!! BRONZE, Union City, Tennessee
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I love you,
You love me,
Me and are meant to be.

We see fear,
We see cheer,
Me and you,
Our hearts are near,
Together forever is what is seems,
Me and you always in our dreams.

I loved you,
You loved me,
Me and you were meant to be.

We saw fear,
We saw cheer,
Me and you,
Our hearts were near,
Together forever is what it seemed,
Me and you,
Were always in our dreams.



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on Oct. 16 2009 at 9:16 am
I-Love-Him!!!! BRONZE, Union City, Tennessee
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idk but thanx for the comment

on Oct. 16 2009 at 9:14 am
I-Love-Him!!!! BRONZE, Union City, Tennessee
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thanx i will try to keep up the good work

on Oct. 1 2009 at 11:45 am
S.2.B.T.S. GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
strive to do/be your very best. you are what you think you are.

this is really gud

i feel like in sum kinda way i can relate to it.

keep up dha gud work!!!!!!!!

aajj said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 1:33 pm
it was good because its about love......i think

ikik said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 3:06 pm
That was an amazing poem at somepoints i was a little bit confussed. Over all great job!

StellaBella said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 2:11 pm
when you said: "me and are meant to be" in the first stanza, did you mean "me and you"? Also i really liked the whole idea of it, it seams like it could be a song. my favorite line was: "together forever is what it seamed" Great job!

on Sep. 29 2009 at 11:35 am
diis iis very guud can b kiinda not

really depresiing but

ii liike iit

=)

on Sep. 29 2009 at 9:24 am
We thought that your poem was very interesting. We really liked your rhyming skills. Great job! Keep writing!