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I just keep thinking

October 19, 2017
By ShrivastavaM SILVER, Delhi, Other
ShrivastavaM SILVER, Delhi, Other
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Be yourself no matter what


We Got locked that day
In top floor of our coaching
Dispersed late after 8
On that busy Thursday evening

I was a bit nervous
Thought they'll go without me
But You looked frivolous
As it was your plan to trap me

We Shouted to call someone
But no-one was there
everyone was gone
Now We're the chess players

Thought we'll break the lock of door before stairs and outside the Class
I was loosing my sane more
you look calm amidst all the dark

I knew it won't work
Lock was high tech steel gaurd
But Kept the mouth shut
Who knows if we could break the glass

Found I had zero balance in cell
With 11% battery
What can possibly happen next
We're in a movie probably

few minutes later  Watchman came
We could have broken the property
Why we were doing that ,he said
We told we were locked actually

I thought he had also lost his mind
In part time jail of that building
But it was most venturesome night
Now I just keep thinking


The author's comments:

It's about a day when me and my friend accidentally got locked in our coaching and I was so terrified after that incident thinking about it and it's consequences if nobody came .i thought to write it down on a paper cause sharing things make you feel better even if it's paper or you.


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on May. 16 2018 at 3:00 pm
ShrivastavaM SILVER, Delhi, Other
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I will keep writing when people like inspire me to. Your work is materpiece @WolfWhisperer0911 Thanks for reading

on May. 16 2018 at 1:42 pm
WolfWhisperer0911 BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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@Shrivastava I must say, I love the idea, I hope you keep writing.

on Nov. 22 2017 at 3:21 pm
ShrivastavaM SILVER, Delhi, Other
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Be yourself no matter what

What are the grammar errors? They get capital by default at every line so...

Spambi SILVER said...
on Nov. 20 2017 at 12:13 pm
Spambi SILVER, Alsea, Oregon
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Capitalization errors, grammar errors, errors errors errors.

on Nov. 17 2017 at 12:42 am
ShrivastavaM SILVER, Delhi, Other
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Be yourself no matter what

Tell me if you liked it or do you think I made any mistakes feel free to suggest