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Raindrop

April 19, 2017
By ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
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Grey days
Even the weather
Feels under the weather
And I am a raindrop
Falling toward the surface of a brown river
Ploink!
I join the rest of the world
As my ephemeral life ripples away
And fades into the restless murk
Of the past



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on May. 4 2017 at 11:24 am
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
LOOK AT MY PROFILE. DO IT.

Thank you so much :) and thank you for your other comments; they mean so much to me :))

kissthemoon said...
on May. 2 2017 at 6:33 pm
kissthemoon, Miami Beach, Florida
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I LOVE this poem, especially the lines "when even the weather feels under the weather". This piece is so descriptive I can just see it happening...