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Roses and Carnations

December 1, 2015
By EnnalsT BRONZE, Bridgeton, New Jersey
EnnalsT BRONZE, Bridgeton, New Jersey
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She is the Rose

I am the Carnation

She carries sharp thorns

I have soft leaves

She is a closed bloom who no one seeks to feed

I am the opened bud who is lovingly cared for

 

She hides her golden center to shun her personality

I share my pollen freely to make friends with the bees

She always praises the moon

I always praise the sun

Blood drips on her petals

My petals get pulled

 

Her petals are clean

My petals are dirty and ripped

Her thorns stay sharp

My leaves shrivel up

She represents love

I represent death

 

Winter comes and takes us away

Our beauty turned to ashes

Our pride to shame

Even so, our rivalry will start again next spring


The author's comments:

Sometimes it's fun to compete with others until someone points out your and your friend(s) flaws. It becomes more than just a simple game. It become of matter of who's better than who. Flowers compete for beauty just as humans compete for personality.


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