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"Life"

September 12, 2015
By BlueRoseAngel GOLD, Redding, California
BlueRoseAngel GOLD, Redding, California
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Favorite Quote:
"You can't keep a wild bird in a cage and expect her to sing her heart filled song". Quote written by me Nicole Sutherland


As time goes by, life sinks away.

The flower that blooms today dies another day.

As early morning dawns the birds sing their song,

new eyes see all bright no dark.

Warm spring days and hot summer days,

they allow all fun and dreams to come.

But when crisp fall arrives, change tags along.

Dark clouds cover the path and cold winds threaten your day.

Winter comes with dark revealing itself,

and as snow falls the flower may fade.


The author's comments:

I want people to understand my poem's true meaning so I explain what each line and symbol means.

1.As time goes by life changes.

2.A flower(child)is born but dies in the future.

3.As early morning(birth)dawns/a child is born,and the birds(parents) sing with joy.

4.Fresh eyes of the child are innocent and don't see bad things.

5.Spring days and summer days represent early childhood.

6.They allow the child to have fun and dream.

7.When crisp fall(teenage,close to adult years)arrives/change happens.

8.Dark clouds(hardships and reality)cover the path(child's life) and cold winds(negative influences)/hardships and reality sink in and make it hard to go through life.

9.Winter(reality)shows the darker side of life.

10.And as snow(tears)falls the flower(child)may fade/when too much sorrow sets in the child may lose their way and their will to live.


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