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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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on Sep. 16 2010 at 10:00 am
SingleGal SILVER, Huntsville, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
PEACE LOVE DEATH

Aww i love it!!!!!!

EbonyTaylor said...
on Sep. 14 2010 at 7:39 am
well in class i read your poem and some of the questions i asked was could you relate to the poem most people said no but i can my mom died in hurricaine katrins another question i ask was could you ever imagine your mom dead they said no all exceptt for one but he kind of slow so hey

on Sep. 14 2010 at 7:33 am
well in our class i read your poem and the questions i ask was could u relate to the poem most kids said no but i can i lost my real mom in hurricaine katrina another one i asked was could any ever imagine there mother dead and most of them said no but overall your poem was great aw and i feel you pain even though i dnt know who you are just continue to keep your head high

reg93 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 11 2010 at 11:59 am
reg93 BRONZE, Billings, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Marilyn Monroe

Your passion really comes out in this poem! This is one amazing poem!

on Sep. 8 2010 at 10:33 pm
Sapphire_Marie GOLD, Red Lion, Pennsylvania
10 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;speak your mind even if your voice shakes&quot;

this is so full of emotion. this is what poetry is about. this is a great poem! keep writing

Ninz59 SILVER said...
on Sep. 8 2010 at 9:39 pm
Ninz59 SILVER, Orland Park, Illinois
5 articles 17 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love conquers all&quot;

Amazing! This really moved me, 

on Sep. 8 2010 at 8:24 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

that was really good. im basically crying right now.

amaranth178 said...
on Sep. 8 2010 at 5:37 pm
amaranth178, Washington, District Of Columbia
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Rarely does a poem affect me this much. I am on the verge of tears. That was fantastic.

on Sep. 8 2010 at 3:08 pm
KhyrsteaBurnell GOLD, New Gloucster, Maine
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Its a lovely poem be proud.

on Sep. 8 2010 at 8:37 am
CoyoteHeart GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You&#039;ll learn from them - if you want to. Just as someday, someone will learn something from you. It&#039;s a beautiful, reciprocal arrangement. And it isn&#039;t education. It&#039;s history. It&#039;s poetry.&quot; ~As said by Mr. Antolini, Catcher in the Rye, JD Salinger

This was rather dark, and of course sad, but...beautiful, in a way. I really enjoyed the style in which you formatted it, also. I lost my mother about four years ago, and this poem puts a voice to a lot of things I've dealt with, as I'm sure anyone who's lost a parent has. Nice job. ^^

nene937 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 8 2010 at 7:45 am
nene937 BRONZE, Dayton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
When you love something no matter how much it hurts sometimes you have to let it go!!!!!!!!!

amh this is one of the greatest poem i ever read i just might cry

on Sep. 7 2010 at 10:28 am
KingReject SILVER, Gueydan, Louisiana
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I loved it. You are a very talented writer and i envy you. Why don't you check out some of my work sometime.

on Sep. 3 2010 at 11:50 am
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;if you don&#039;t have something nice to say, don&#039;t say anything at all.&quot;

when i read the first 2 lines i just had to rate it 5 out of 5 cuz it was awesome sad deep heartbreaking and mind awakening

on Sep. 3 2010 at 11:48 am
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;if you don&#039;t have something nice to say, don&#039;t say anything at all.&quot;

its awesome. makes u sad and teaches u to appreciate things while u have it instead of when its all gone

on Sep. 3 2010 at 11:47 am
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;if you don&#039;t have something nice to say, don&#039;t say anything at all.&quot;

it was !!!

on Sep. 3 2010 at 11:46 am
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;if you don&#039;t have something nice to say, don&#039;t say anything at all.&quot;

i totally agree

on Sep. 3 2010 at 11:45 am
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;if you don&#039;t have something nice to say, don&#039;t say anything at all.&quot;

really deep

Crispy said...
on Sep. 1 2010 at 7:33 am
Crispy, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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This poem is heartbreaking and makes you think. People dont realize what they have till its gone.

on Aug. 29 2010 at 7:55 pm
jesus.musik.freak BRONZE, Port St Lucie, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
If your going through hell, keep on going, don&#039;t slow down. If your scared don&#039;t show it. You might get out before the devil even knows your there. - Rodney Atkins, If your going through hell

This is very beautifully written. My mom has to go into surgery and I am so scared I am going to loose her. It really makes me remeber how special she is.

on Aug. 18 2010 at 12:29 pm
LadyInBlack BRONZE, Randallstown, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
We are all the same because we all think that we are different,

Excatly how I felt. This piece is beautiful, I got the chills halfway through, I understand the depth of this && can relate. Using experiences to write , always ends great, even if it is just soft && subtle. The topic, the ending is what lurred me in. Keep Writing babygirl :)